Crack A Bottle Remix

[Emadyville]

http://www.myspace.com/ddubswinch

Another late night with a drunk bartholomew,
I’m talkin to josh and that shits hard ta do,
Cause he’s still drunk ready to spill guts pissed,
I found out mills stopped him from getting that kiss,
Can you remember the last time he had a bitch,
His times up but Mills wants to leave what the hell is this,
Then Griffo steps in decides to play the care taker,
Kicks the bitches out and no ones getting laid here,
An unwritten code no one signed the papers,
Cock blockin your homie son that shits major,
So do yourselves and everyone listenin a favor,
Don’t stop a man from pussy even if its to save her,
There’s no place for that kind of stupid behavior,
That’s bush league, you pussies forgot a razor,
Girls play games so the men have to be players,
And we are all suitin up so lets keep it straight here…

I have seen the best and worst from a chick thats wasted,
Fine line between a whore and ta flip lets face it,
They wanna test their intake and Fridays they ace it,
They pace it, but whats another shot lets chase it,
Next thing you know they’re butt naked in a basement,
Looking around for beer like where the case went,
Some will pass out ass out in the grass now,
And those still awake are bait for guys to cash out,
We’re just as drunk and ya know how females get,
You got it pictured in your head without details yet,
Bitch again which is them picture them intrestin,
Visit them fit it in hit it and quit it then,
Mask a laugh, ask to have, grab grasp an ass,
Tap ass and fast, smash and dash like you hit the gas,
It’s like you hit the dash as you sip another glass,
Until you pass out at last until you pass out at last…

I love this alcohol but it annoys me when,
People think that it can turn these boys ta men,
They drink too much, start with the noise and then,
It’s shirts off to fight like I enjoy ta win,
But in truth they don’t see all the insecurities,
You show everyone you’re a tool and perfectly,
I don’t play that cause people have heard a me,
And if they didn’t doesn’t mean I’m a turn and be,
Breakin bottles over heads or start flippin shit,
So what I’m sayin is guys get in grip with it,
If you really had a problem then man up prior,
If you think you’re so big throw your hands up higher,
Cause when the gloves are off you are stuck with it,
Messin with the wrong guy has you duck and shit,
Runnin away scared jump in ya truck and split,
Don’t think the next that time that you see him you won’t get fuckin hit…

[B.A.D.]

zshare?

[Solace]

checking it out!

edit: your flow was nice man, nothing special. thought some of the lines were funny. i dont know why but the verses felt a bit empty. and when the chorus came in, it always sounded choppy imo, like outta no where his voice comes and its chopped off at the beginning. It sounds like "Tah crack a bottle..etc." no "So crack a bottle". Decent enough, but its not my fave from you.

[Emadyville]

Haha I did write this at 2am this morning, but thanks for the feed.

[Xray]

Fuck outta here if you think I'ma feed this, I haven't seen you feed anyone for ages.

[Emadyville]

Fuck outta here if you think I'ma feed this, I haven't seen you feed anyone for ages.

Yeah I did post this solely because I was so desperate for your feed, thanks for taking the time to explain your reasoning though, cause I'll make sure to do everything in my power to get feed from you in the future

[Xray]

Never mind what I said before, I apologize if I was being a dick. But you know how tr audio stage is man, most of us are artists that feed others, so its a feed mine, i'll feed yours type thing. You should of known that by now, I know your probably just lazy, but whatever. No hate.

[Emadyville]

Never mind what I said before, I apologize if I was being a dick. But you know how tr audio stage is man, most of us are artists that feed others, so its a feed mine, i'll feed yours type thing. You should of known that by now, I know your probably just lazy, but whatever. No hate.

Yeah see I did feed people, more so in the creative writing, but I always was feeding, and rarely got feed myself, so I kinda stopped cause it wasn't worth my time. At least this way I don't get pissed when people don't feed my shit. And yeah that sounded really dick btw, thanks for clearin that up

[AspirinE]

Good lyrics, not bad for a remix.. I like the third verse best i like the story alltogether.

Quality is mediocre. u need to work on mixing. it can do much for your songs.
Add more feeling to your flow, coz the flow is not bad, u just a little unsure on the mic.

[Emadyville]

thanks for the feed. I was tryin to show a little laid back mood in my flow and delivery, i guess i shoulda put a little more into it, and yeah i was kinda rushed on this song with mixing but i'm gettin better but thanks again for the feed

[AspirinE]

thanks for the feed. I was tryin to show a little laid back mood in my flow and delivery, i guess i shoulda put a little more into it, and yeah i was kinda rushed on this song with mixing but i'm gettin better but thanks again for the feed

No biggie. its just shit i noticed, i overall like'd it for real

[Emadyville]

thanks for the feed. I was tryin to show a little laid back mood in my flow and delivery, i guess i shoulda put a little more into it, and yeah i was kinda rushed on this song with mixing but i'm gettin better but thanks again for the feed

No biggie. its just shit i noticed, i overall like'd it for real

Thanks, the first verse of this was actually true, I was talkin to this kid after I left this party about what happened after I left, the rest was just ya know tryin to go with the whole concept of a party or whatever. But so far it seems everyones been likin it, its been up not even 5 days and got over 1,400 plays haha mostly cause of the title I'm sure.