Lil Sample - Preview (ZS)

[Ka0t1c]

this is just a lil sample and in no way reflects me 100%. enjoy, criticize

preview kaotic.mp3 - 3.50MB

it's got 2 verses and at the end there's plenty of time to do what you do...

this forum's my portal to explore more and open my stored wisdom
cuz there is a force within me to tell my story and it's origin
well there is no pen, i am just really brainstorming, ignoring pretend
while i'm pouring for friends what's important to them and of course me
no one can quarantine my mission, i won't abort even when corners i'm pinned in
cuz what i've been born to exhibit will not be ignored or hidden
and until war is forbidden i shall excel with ambition
cuz i was born to be listened to, oh i sworn i'd be different
so written on this form are my many lyrics without limits
coherent to spirits who appear with the privilege to live by good principles
from each of my pivots, now i submit to you the beginnin, i call it the big preview...
(oh yeah cuz I'm)
i'm being pushed and pulled to the left and to the right
and it looks so old but under pressure is my life
i must put control like does a lever to my drive
or i'd go off road to the desert and nose dive

i tried to stay calm but now i feel they're way wrong
i won't deal with how they treat me for too long
cuz it seems they're playing the same song
while i've got a new one, you're gonna see who's come

b/c i'm done pretendin i belong here
this is just the beginnin of a strong year
where i make up from what i've lost
cuz i'm takin off when i get the all clear

everybody watch, beware of Kaotic
cuz out in the air's a psychotic about to premier
so you'd better prepare since you've been cautioned
that what i broadcast is severe cuz i'm causin a ruckus

i swear now a monster's amongst us bound to appear, call in the youngsters
cuz i'm grouchier than Oscar cuz this dump is not my shelter
plus i'm no elf like Santa's helpers, I myself am an entrepenuer
til i'm gone or quit sellin my albums and halt my awesome career...

[AspirinE]

I can feel some good flow on this and ur using a beat that is hard to match, with makes the flow very good.

Poor quality and its hard to hear you, try not eat ur words up, add more clarity to ur speech.

I'm overall very keen of it, like it to say the least, Ill definately check more of ur tracks out.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx asp, i was using some weird mic that's my friend's and this was done on the 1st take but i will use clarity when i use my stuff in the studio, just gotta get out the army and use my time for music, thanx for reviewin this!

[Ka0t1c]

ne one else???

[Ka0t1c]

*bump

[B.A.D.]

the beat choice is real real good, I like the vibe of it

hmm, you need to learn to mix the tracks cuz this one has a lot of future, but this quality doesnt helps a lot, so its kinda hard to understand you, specially after first verse

the lyrics are amazing, I love the style you got, definitively can be great you just need more practice, also I like your vibe... you need to fix the structure a bit so you don't get confused into how to flow it.

I don't like to listen to unfinished tracks, but when u have it fully finished I'd like to listen again

so keep doing it, you got good skills for writing, just need to practice how to get it on the mic

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for the feed, i'm looking to get it fixed, right now i don't know how i'm doing the 3rd verse, this is supposed to show my different styles of rhyming, so that's the concept. my friend is the one who has the beat and knows a lil bit about mixing, i just told him that it's hard to hear me clear so he needs to tone the beat down or turn my vocals up.


again, thanx for dropping by!

[Steve Spag]

Damn man, pretty good stuff. I feel your voice could be a little stronger, but the flow for the most part was on-point so it made it sound real nice. The lyrics were pretty sick, nothing dissapointing, as I expected, a good track man!

Keep that shit up!

[Ka0t1c]

thanx steve! glad you came thru, i hate my voice, lol, but i'll get there. i enjoyed doing this but it's incomplete.

[Xray]

I didn't hear what some of these dudes that left you feed heard lol. Definitely need to re-record this, cause I wasn't feeling it. Flow seemed OK, but a lot of parts you fucked it up at, delivery needs work, you sound too bored ATM. Lyrics were good from what I heard, and yo whats up with the mixing? Sounded weird man, might want to raise the Acapella man. Pronunciation needs work, could barely understand what your saying. Those were the flaws of the track, but keep it up man, you got potential.

i hate my voice

I feel ya, I went through the same thing before, but you get used to it.

[Ka0t1c]

ok, Xray, i will re-record this piece with more lyrics but should i slow down my tempo, that way my voice will be deeper and also u could understand it better, ne ways, i don't mess with the instrumental and settings, my friend does that.

[Steve Spag]

i hate my voice

I feel ya, I went through the same thing before, but you get used to it.

Yeah, I think every rapper goes through that. When I first started out my voice was absolute garbage, but now it's finally coming along, lmao.

[enjinn]

man this track is nice...you spit real fast and i like that...but id also like to hear you on a slow beat...good shit

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for listening and reviewing