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Street

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 28th, '09, 04:43

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5628641877d81ac8/ <--- song

Lyrics:

March the metallic objects, bust projects
my optics spark with logic, high in cockpit
stop it, stop trying to defile my flow
freestyle the show, then pyro your nose
my rhymes glow, explode into pieces
spread diseases, until rappers turn to creatures
the ghetto preacher, speakin' knowledge
punchline ya face, and break neck cartilidge
my offence organized,
to the point that I realize, then tore your thieghs
conscious bore the lies, I can't take it
rhymes are evasive, until the placement
attacks with full power, bull power, devour
and shower lightning spit, make you cower
I rhyme sweet and sour like chinese rice
and they stay stuck in your head like siamese lice
aye bee, cee dee's E's like desert eagles
reserve legal, then murder people
icecicle bicycle, riding lyrical pavement
writing mystical payment, just save it
pencil writes ancient hieroglyphics
as it rides across encryptions that are cryptic
so prolific, I'm the tragic academic
thirsty to start another world war epidemic
fight me, you're pathetic
the only thing you can spit is synthetics
change up, age sucks, hit you with the plain hooks
pain shook, slay looks, bloodshed the stains took
delivery shivers me, just an identity
readily waiting to attack all my enemies
and then it's me, alone on the street
weight on my shoulders breaks bones of the weak
I'll end this track, this shit was just on my mind
I'm merely a vessle, a pawn of rhyme.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Street

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 28th, '09, 04:54

dope :y:
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Re: Street

Postby Requiem » Feb 28th, '09, 05:02

nice shit man. i already fed it on msn. but great track, ur improving man :happy:
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Re: Street

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 28th, '09, 05:05

Thanks for checking it out
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Street

Postby Xray » Feb 28th, '09, 06:27

Gave you feed on msn man, improving big time man. Seriously your improving by day, cause each time you send me a track I sense an improvement made. Love your dedication to this man, keep this up and you'll be great in no time man. I believe you can do it homie, the mixing is genius by the way, I seriously love it. PROPS to ax-d damn man ax you did a GREAT FUCKING JOB man. Good to see TR artists is helping one another out. :8)
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Re: Street

Postby enjinn » Feb 28th, '09, 11:11

you had a good flow and lyrics...good shit
each one teaches one
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Re: Street

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 28th, '09, 11:54

that's what i'm talking about MC ,, i hve seen much improvement here bro .. i loved this track .. it's the best for me ,., your flow is nice , delivery is much better than before .. keep going like this homie .. i'm listening .. 9/10 .. :y:
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Re: Street

Postby gutawafang » Feb 28th, '09, 14:33

Nice. Good choice of beat cuz the theme is STREET. And yeah, delivery's TOTALLY improved. Great structure. And as usual, great rhyming. :y:
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Re: Street

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 28th, '09, 18:18

Wow, thanks guys for the sound feed! :worship: :worship:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Street

Postby Solace » Feb 28th, '09, 18:20

I enjoyed this track from you, its on trshadymusic as you know. Delivery improved as did your flow i really liked it along with the lyrics and choice of beat. Keep it up man
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Re: Street

Postby AspirinE » Feb 28th, '09, 18:26

Agree, delivery has improved, so has the mixing, good lyriccs, not bad punchlines. You have it in you and you have potential to use it. :Y: Id rate the track as average, because i like the lyrics but...


-I didnt like the forced flow, you really needa try to LEARN ur track, like learn ur lyrics and rhyme them without reading and improvise the flow technique as u go... its the whole point of rapping, it brings ur tracks down a bit.

-One more thing, Dont make so many stops, try stretching words or adding words in the places the flow should break down, otherwise you cant feel the flow.


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Re: Street

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 28th, '09, 18:31

Thanks guys, much appreciated! :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Street

Postby B.A.D. » Feb 28th, '09, 20:30

wow, glad I could help you out with the mixing man, Propz to Sajjad & Nu Syd tho' cuz they was the one who taught me how to do it hahaha

also the lyrics are impressive, excelent job man :y:

I liked it a lot, but you should start making complete tracks now :y:
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Re: Street

Postby randomghost » Mar 1st, '09, 06:28

feelin the lyrics :happy: flow is a bit forced :sweating: nice delivery..verse is energetic and powerful...am feelin it....nice mixing from x :y: good stuff mayne...lookin forward to hear more... :8)
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Re: Street

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 1st, '09, 09:50

AspirinE wrote:Agree, delivery has improved, so has the mixing, good lyriccs, not bad punchlines. You have it in you and you have potential to use it. :Y: Id rate the track as average, because i like the lyrics but...


-I didnt like the forced flow, you really needa try to LEARN ur track, like learn ur lyrics and rhyme them without reading and improvise the flow technique as u go... its the whole point of rapping, it brings ur tracks down a bit.

-One more thing, Dont make so many stops, try stretching words or adding words in the places the flow should break down, otherwise you cant feel the flow.


word is bond :b: ill look out for more. :b:



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