Dark Thoughts - feedback please

[stealth]

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I fall down to my knees and weep/
Its hard to live, hard to try, hard to sleep/
Every time I try and rest my head/
I just want to grab that gun and fill it with lead/

What do you do to handle stress, when everything turns to a mess/
You got no one to hold, no one to caress/
Every part of living your life seems to feel like a test/
And all you want to do is feel nothing and be careless/
Lets talk about some common problems and how I want to stomp some/
Money is another mans greed but we all need it bad/
Then we all know about the family problems but I should be thankful I still got a mum and a dad/
My heads a mess and I

[Trigger]

yo, if that is all tru yo, im feelin u right now, shits goin down, life in it's self
is one great big fuk up
thx 4 sharin ur thought s keep it up

[stealth]

thanx

[walend]

nice lyrics stealth

[HAYZI]

please cud u post songs and raps that are not battles in creative writing,
thanks dude

[stealth]

no worries, i was wondering were it went. in the future ill place them here