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new quick lil track "Now A Daze"

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new quick lil track "Now A Daze"

Postby DƎRDYPK » Mar 4th, '09, 05:14

sumthing i threw up real quick
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you want sumthin new & you want sumthin true
my face turn blue then i pass out & puke
battles intrude next second i'll be rude
the same old dude now a days i'm getting booed
world so crude & i'm stuck inside
I find myself glued & i take a ride
dip & slide across the globe as i glide
holding onto pride but deep inside i see i lied
soo teriffed next second imma hide
say that i died not a friend of mine cried
this is the note next day imma croak
tieing up the rope jump down & i choke
i'm lost & i'm broke & i'm searching 4 some hope
cutting at my throat as i'm layin onna boat
rhymes be my quote the realest shit i wrote
got it so i spoke & i always gotta float
high above the land now i'm sinkin in the sand
reaching out a hand as i take my last stand
im such a sad man so i went to search 4 help
ending up mad again so i fucking cut myself
naw thas a joke what the fuck do you think?
swiming inna moat down below i'll probly sink
take another blink i think i really need a shrink
my clothes really stink & i'm on my last link
i need another drink this hate is the taste
copy cut paste my vocals are a waste
label me a fake so i cant take a break
wut i create is a verse in the greats
drowning inna lake & i cant see straight
using raps as my bait & i think i'm too late
i cant consentrate without no food up in my plate
i really underate all the tracks that i make
music is my life but i sit up all night
it really aint tight all the rhymes that i write
still i gottaa fight i think i see da light
i barely gotta sight if i'm taking off for flight
oh shit grip a bong PK got it on!!!??
gonna rip a song in da beat where i'm drawn
muthafucka give a shout out now to The DERDY
.............like u fucking bitchez heard me
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Re: new quick lil track "Now A Daze"

Postby Slovinec » Mar 4th, '09, 05:58

nice
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Re: new quick lil track "Now A Daze"

Postby DƎRDYPK » Mar 4th, '09, 06:00

thanks
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Re: new quick lil track "Now A Daze"

Postby enjinn » Mar 4th, '09, 13:50

i always loved this beat...your flow was tight...good lyrics...nice track...we should collab
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Re: new quick lil track "Now A Daze"

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 4th, '09, 15:08

lyrics are a lil to simple..try to make em lil more complex if you can...

but your flow is real nice...quality and effects are good man good job
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Re: new quick lil track "Now A Daze"

Postby Le Tunisien » Mar 4th, '09, 15:15

Great :y: lol the eminem influence seems to be here lolz :p Nice :y:
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Re: new quick lil track "Now A Daze"

Postby DƎRDYPK » Mar 4th, '09, 21:48

le tunisien wrote:Great :y: lol the eminem influence seems to be here lolz :p Nice :y:


thanx 4 the feed everyone :y: Eminem is a big influence on me........then Dzk......then Riga J.......then......Sticcy :o
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