PIK -- YOU MAKE ME SICK

by **Call Me Pik** » Mar 8th, '09, 21:45

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5673988529c7634b/

(verse 1)
every morn she be callin my phone
picked the phone up all like oh hell no
i shudda known dis drone gotther own ringtone
so when the cell ring i just press ignowe
this negroes incognito leave me ee lone
no we wont elope contacts revoked
ya kinda like a retowed
tell me why u try n why u tryna see me 4

(Bridge)
she texted my cell phone sed hello hey darlin its me
she texted my myspace sed hi babe hey darlin its me
she text my pager my facebook and left me a message
on my v-mail my email sed hey darlin it me

(Chorus)
and im like
oh lord
hold up
girl im bout to throw up
if i get a phone call
or another fucking text message
im gone be siiiick
you make me sick
you make me sick

(verse 2)
u keep calling my phone
when im telling u no
n u dont understand
that i have my own plans
im like shyt shyt shyt shyt
everytime you call
i say shit shit shit shit
so whut im spose tah do

(Bridge)
she texted my cell phone sed hello hey darlin its me
she texted my myspace sed hi babe hey darlin its me
she text my pager my facebook and left me a message
on my v-mail my email sed hey darlin it me

(Chorus)
and im like
oh lord
hold up
girl im bout to throw up
if i get a phone call
or another fucking text message
im gone be siiiick
you make me sick
you make me sick

i dont
ever wanna see u
call or reach you
everytime i see you
i dont
ever wanna see you
everytime i see you
i dont wanna see you
i dont
ever wanna see u
call or reach you
everytime i see you
i dont
ever wanna see you
everytime i see you
i dont wanna see you

(Bridge)
she texted my cell phone sed hello hey darlin its me
she texted my myspace sed hi babe hey darlin its me
she text my pager my facebook and left me a message
on my v-mail my email sed hey darlin it me

(Chorus)
and im like
oh lord
hold up
girl im bout to throw up
if i get a phone call
or another fucking text message
im gone be siiiick
you make me sick
you make me sick

by **B.A.D.** » Mar 9th, '09, 01:33

definitively not my type of track

what I liked about it is that you got great great quality, nice mixing process

verse 1 is great, I love how you played it, good thang

but hmm, I wasn't feelin the hook a lot... I had a whole nother beat type pictured in my mind for this kind of track hahaha

good work

by **Jay-19** » Mar 9th, '09, 03:10

I pretty much have to agree with everything that Ax-D said.

by **Xray** » Mar 9th, '09, 05:09

I'm like shyt shyt shyt shyt, everytime you sing, I'm like shit shit shit shit, everytime you drop a track. :laughing:

by **DelinQuent** » Mar 9th, '09, 11:25

i figured since it wasnt your style you'd come with some shit talking instead of leaving proper respectful feedback :y:

by **enjinn** » Mar 9th, '09, 16:11

i didnt like the singing...but it was a cool concept and you did it well

by **Sarah P** » Mar 10th, '09, 19:49

baby

you got haters! ^
i thought this was really good darling! i love it hehe, i downloaded it now!
the hook is really good hun, i will be listenin to more of your stuff :flower:

love youu
xx

by **B.A.D.** » Mar 10th, '09, 20:59

Sarah P wrote:baby you got haters! ^
i thought this was really good darling! i love it hehe, i downloaded it now!
the hook is really good hun, i will be listenin to more of your stuff
love youu
xx

by **Call Me Pik** » Mar 11th, '09, 15:50

lmao thanks for showin me luv sarah its appreciated

there are some more of my songs on myspace

http://www.myspace.com/pikpocket

by **neversnooze** » Mar 11th, '09, 17:21

i know girls are definetly going to enjoy this song by you. the delivery is so clear and sweet. in my opinion verse 2 could use work, maybe more words.

overall it was a nice and sweet song. girls will be all over you :smoking: