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Re: My Life As It Is Written

Postby Robbie G » Mar 8th, '09, 23:06

That was really good man. I like the motion you put into it. :y:

I didn't really like the intro part...to me it seemed like bad quality and choppy flow but after like 20 seconds it was great... :sweating:
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Re: My Life As It Is Written

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 8th, '09, 23:48

Shady Babie wrote:That was really good man. I like the motion you put into it. :y:

I didn't really like the intro part...to me it seemed like bad quality and choppy flow but after like 20 seconds it was great... :sweating:

Thanks dude :y:
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Re: My Life As It Is Written

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 9th, '09, 18:58

More feed please? :unsure:
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Re: My Life As It Is Written

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 10th, '09, 01:56

like I said, the beat choice is excelent, maybe you could turn the volume of it up a bit haha

quality is real real good

the hook... hmm.. It needs work rhyme-wise and flow-wise

the verses are real good, flowed well... and damn, got real real nice deep lyrical style with sad in it, I love it...

this is the best I've hurd from you so far, the delivery and emotions are :worship: :worship: :worship:

verse 3 was the best!!

excelent track man, defo downloading n puttin in my mp3... amazing beat choice again

:y: keep up the good work

you gotta fix hook 3 cuz its timed really wrong...

a lil flow issues, but easy to fix :y:
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Re: My Life As It Is Written

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 10th, '09, 02:06

Big Ax-D wrote:like I said, the beat choice is excelent, maybe you could turn the volume of it up a bit haha

quality is real real good

the hook... hmm.. It needs work rhyme-wise and flow-wise

the verses are real good, flowed well... and damn, got real real nice deep lyrical style with sad in it, I love it...

this is the best I've hurd from you so far, the delivery and emotions are :worship: :worship: :worship:

verse 3 was the best!!

excelent track man, defo downloading n puttin in my mp3... amazing beat choice again

:y: keep up the good work

you gotta fix hook 3 cuz its timed really wrong...

a lil flow issues, but easy to fix :y:

Thanks for the feed bro! Always appreciated. :flower:
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Re: My Life As It Is Written

Postby Solace » Mar 10th, '09, 03:03

Big Ax-D wrote:excelent track man, defo downloading n puttin in my mp3... amazing beat choice again

Damn man anon getting ANOTHER person to put your shit on their mp3

Glad shit is working out man :y:
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Re: My Life As It Is Written

Postby randomghost » Mar 12th, '09, 18:55

dayme mayne the beat is awesome :y: :y: :y: :y: good flow..woow lovin ur style...good ass delivery am feeling it :y: :y: :y: :y: vocals are a bit high :sweating: but overall its a gr8 track...i liked it :y: :y: :8)
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