DQ When My Time Comes

[DelinQuent]

this song was gonna be on my album, but ive decided to cut all songs with sampled hooks.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/56833277d21f0749/

http://www.myspace.com/iamdelinquent

LYRICS:
Verse One-i dreamed i was crazy, so so so crazy/
why am i angry?, constantly frustrated/
confused with no clue as what to do/
and it seems no one cares, as ive seen no ones there/
i'm unseen and i'm scared, in need of someone there/
to the knees for a prayer, i'm a teen in despair/
and i'm under constant threats, but i hold no regrets/
climb to the top, i strive for the best/
and i'd die for it yes, its my life long quest/
and baby when my time comes, forget the wrong that ive done/
remember for my passion, my words and my actions/
i wanna leave the world, with everyone impassioned/
to go for their goals, but do sell ya souls/
and don't judge another man till you walk in his soles/
never lie to no one, just let the truth unfold/
lifes not about skills ilife's about who you know/

Verse Two-crazy crazy crazy like me/
tired so tireed of fighting/
then this song might be, the right thing for you/
when you can't seem to find, the right thing to do/
just ask yourself, are you living life true?/
just make the right moves, and make your own rules/
if it seems no one cares, gotta care for yourself/
and fly solo till you find someone else/
who appreciates you, just for bein you/
never change for no one stay true to what you do/
call your own shots and make your own moves/
wether win or lose, always gotta be you/
but after all the lies, honesty seems askew/
true heed to the clue, if they lie tell em bye/
they disguise the prize, keep ya eyes to the sky/
never assume, just try to find why/

[Sarah P]

i love youuu!!
you're amazing at this!!
xx

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

your voice sounds much better this time..more natural...
1st verse is decent in every aspect...
then flow is messed up..i love how you start the 2nd verse....but then the "me//fiiight-ing" rhyme...eh...
pronouncation is okay..as i said due some flow issues you had to rush couple words....but still fine..you started off great but then track has gotten a lil weak imo....
i actually love the idea how you went on from the hook....very creative
...lyrics are fine no complaining....

[DelinQuent]

sarah p, lol, thanks for taking the time out to listen

chet, thanks a lot for taking time out to listen. about the me/fighting rhyme, i just like to try and make words that people dont normally see rhyming, and do some work to make them rhyme, sometimes it works, sometimes it doesnt lol. thanks again

[Sarah P]

sarah p, lol, thanks for taking the time out to listen

chet, thanks a lot for taking time out to listen. about the me/fighting rhyme, i just like to try and make words that people dont normally see rhyming, and do some work to make them rhyme, sometimes it works, sometimes it doesnt lol. thanks again

that is chris not chet!

[DelinQuent]

GOD FUCKING DAMNIT, i see the c, and automatically type chet.

CHRIS, thank you, my bad lmfao

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

all cool...was about to point that out..but sarah did haha...but yo keep this thread clean...
sry for the off topic post

[Tornado]

Much better shit, good beat and yo rode it well for the most part, just seemed a tiny bit off in some areas, especially the second verse as the first was much strong. Beat suited the song and chorus worked with the track and lyrics were fine.

[dbeauluvswomen]

lol..you found the beat. I remember you asked me for a it a long time ago. I forgot! It is a great beat. You did ride the beat pretty well. This is definitely in my top 3 out of all the tracks I've heard from you. It's different than the usual songs I've heared. I thought you put the words together nicely with well done rhymes. Quality song. Keep bringin em

ps. I like how you faded out the hard rock part at the end..I understand why..haha

[DelinQuent]

tornado-thanks a ton for taking time out to listen

dbeau- yeah i located the beat lmfao. and yes, the hard rock at the end was flat out annoying lol.

[<Stiiccy>]

this was a preety good track

i loved the beat...

You kept the raps real and on topic so thats good...they flowed preety well together..

You kept em simple so atleast your doing you and not tryin to be neone else

Only problem i heard was a couple of dubbs didnt match...try to keep em matched up...dont worry i also have a problem matching my dubs exactly the right time

good track though man

[randomghost]

good beat lovin ur style here daymmme......good flow...good ass delivery nice lyrics hot stuff.....lovin this track...good mixing...nice stuff i enjoyed listening

[DelinQuent]

sticcy, glad you put the bullshit aside and yes sometimes i fuck up the overlays a bit, usually i fix them, this time, lazy. lol

killa, lol, you must have heard me around the time that i had just gotten the autotune vst, i went autotune crazy with it lmfao. thanks for the feed

random, glad you enjoyed the track.

thanks as well to anyone who even dropped in to listen

[B.A.D.]

ohshit!!! DQ is putting another album out??

why youre gettn all the sampled hooks out of the album???

damnz, cuz this track was definitively keepable

"lifes not about skills ilife's about who you know"... pretti damn right man

I loved this track man, excelent stuff

no flaws at all

damnz, if album tracks gonna be like this its gonna be a HARD album

if ya need any help on it, let me know... I can supply exclusive beats, hooks, verses, skits, album covers... anything u need man

[Slim Zaddy]

checkin this out , i will feed ya later bro