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Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 12th, '09, 04:49

This is just a lil collabo verse that did for PK...btw this has no mixing what so ever ...all i did was dubb it...
so dont comment on mixing god damnit cuzz there is none lol

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i gots varity of pills, for all kinna things,
one for my sleep the other for my dick
red ones, blue ones, some wid 2 colers,
i even wrote a book, on how to rape an murder
im all about my self, could fuck about wealth,
imma spend it on weed, booze an snuff films,
and if it dont kill me, hell ill be lucky,
ill pop 50 more, in a cell wid bob marly
kurt on my left, hell he finaly got clean,
thought he knew dope, till the fucka met me,
grabbed a 12 gauge, and made a bong for me,
and got 20 bowls, get the shit off a me,
im so blew out, that my soul is own q,
everything the demon says, i shall do,
cuzz im fucked up man, and i got no soul,
im dug in a hole, with another 50 bowls,


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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 12th, '09, 05:15

Sarah wrote:your really improving :8)



im sure this was intended or real...but you sure sound stoned rofl

no comment :smoking:
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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby gutawafang » Mar 12th, '09, 05:17

Flow was good Sticcy. But some lines didn't make sense.

Let me quote:
"red ones, blue ones, some wid 2 colers,
i even wrote a book, on how to rape an murder"
Yeah, those two lines was like WTF. LOL.
No offense, just my HONEST opinion dude. But yeah, you rap very well, dude.
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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 12th, '09, 05:23

gutawafang wrote:Flow was good Sticcy. But some lines didn't make sense.

Let me quote:
"red ones, blue ones, some wid 2 colers,
i even wrote a book, on how to rape an murder"
Yeah, those two lines was like WTF. LOL.
No offense, just my HONEST opinion dude. But yeah, you rap very well, dude.

"red ones blue ones, some with 2 colers" --is referring to the different colers of pills...
and the part about rape and murder just sounded cool to me lmfao...

thanks for the feed fish,,,and sarah :worship: :worship:
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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 12th, '09, 11:56

dude i wrote a boke on how to rape a rapist n then got him to put this song on his playlist. :unsure:


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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 12th, '09, 12:12

lyrics was'nt that good , but aside form lyrics and rhymes and these staff , i liked your flow , and your punctuation for the words,, you had a good tone and your delivery is dope .. i enjoyed it . gd job :y:
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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 12th, '09, 22:20

thank yall for feeding...and bar ..um imma take that as a compleiment hahahaha :worship:
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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby Xray » Mar 13th, '09, 09:05

Like I said on msn, its a good track, beat was dope. One thing I noticed though, is the pronunciation is weak. You said "I got zariety pills" instead of saying variety. In the next line you say "day" instead of dick. You said "mada" instead of "murder". Gotta work on your pronunciation man, cause this is confusing shit man, try to be more clear, I mean its already hard to understand what your saying with your hard south side accent, but miss pronouncing words is just to much for me. Other than that it was good, minus the accent and this song would sound new yorkish.
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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 13th, '09, 21:38

Xray wrote:Like I said on msn, its a good track, beat was dope. One thing I noticed though, is the pronunciation is weak. You said "I got zariety pills" instead of saying variety. In the next line you say "day" instead of dick. You said "mada" instead of "murder". Gotta work on your pronunciation man, cause this is confusing shit man, try to be more clear, I mean its already hard to understand what your saying with your hard south side accent, but miss pronouncing words is just to much for me. Other than that it was good, minus the accent and this song would sound new yorkish.

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but i said "I gots variety" "gots" is a common term me and my boys use sometimes...and i did say dick lol...and i was trying to say murder like that
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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby Xray » Mar 13th, '09, 22:04

<Stiiccy> wrote:
Xray wrote:Like I said on msn, its a good track, beat was dope. One thing I noticed though, is the pronunciation is weak. You said "I got zariety pills" instead of saying variety. In the next line you say "day" instead of dick. You said "mada" instead of "murder". Gotta work on your pronunciation man, cause this is confusing shit man, try to be more clear, I mean its already hard to understand what your saying with your hard south side accent, but miss pronouncing words is just to much for me. Other than that it was good, minus the accent and this song would sound new yorkish.

thanks

but i said "I gots variety" "gots" is a common term me and my boys use sometimes...and i did say dick lol...and i was trying to say murder like that

Oh in that case it matters on the accents you hear daily, I don't hear much of that accent here, unless I check a south side rapper or something so its complicated for me. :sweating:
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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Mar 13th, '09, 22:14

Xray wrote:
<Stiiccy> wrote:
Xray wrote:Like I said on msn, its a good track, beat was dope. One thing I noticed though, is the pronunciation is weak. You said "I got zariety pills" instead of saying variety. In the next line you say "day" instead of dick. You said "mada" instead of "murder". Gotta work on your pronunciation man, cause this is confusing shit man, try to be more clear, I mean its already hard to understand what your saying with your hard south side accent, but miss pronouncing words is just to much for me. Other than that it was good, minus the accent and this song would sound new yorkish.

thanks

but i said "I gots variety" "gots" is a common term me and my boys use sometimes...and i did say dick lol...and i was trying to say murder like that

Oh in that case it matters on the accents you hear daily, I don't hear much of that accent here, unless I check a south side rapper or something so its complicated for me. :sweating:

yeh i understand...i dont listen to much rap really
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Re: Sticcy's got a new verse!!!(UNMIXED SAMPLE)

Postby AspirinE » Mar 14th, '09, 19:49

verrry nice... i like! very like.

I like the lyrics especially.
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