by slimsoxshady » Mar 16th, '09, 23:13
i like the rhymes and the flow, its all there...my only concern is the delivery
to me it sounds like ur really close to the mic and talking really soft
if i were u i would back a way from the mic (i record at 10-14 inches away) and speak louder...i think that would make it sound so much better, just my opinion. respect
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