A History Between The Rhymes.

[MC Anonymous]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/57247071a4a81f85/ <-- song
(I lose breath a lot in this because my asthma is acting up, forgive me.
Lyrics:

You fight against...you own image
You fight against life, you fight against yourself
You can't think, your past damages future thoughts
all the while, eating away at your sanity
This is my story, my life in words,
my life condensed into a vital verse.

As life passes by I pace with glassy eyes
life had me cry, then life asked me why
my reflection is life, my shadow is death
I battle with breaths, you dismantle what's left
I cry when it rains, can't expend my pain
land was gain, enslaved, and put to waste
bodies bloodstained my body, gained by shotties
oddly enough, my blood is polluted inside me
spirits ride me, mana shields the source
anger takes over, disaster was forced
blood pumps fast, magma in my veins
landscape stained for ending my name
as I walk, time stops, language is destroyed
this void in my heart has been deployed
my eyes can bleed, now the tears are pure
my eyes can see, for the years are sure
death for rebirth, born with this curse
humanity ends at the start of this verse
bacteria inside me, with no antibodies
besides catastrophe I held back softly
I can't take the pressure, my bones shatter
shards strike my heart, lava splatters
I shout a war cry, skin turns to craters
till the end of time, nothing can save her....

[Requiem]

hmm, beat sounds familiar, lol.
beats a little low in the beginning, but i like the intro.

the verse was fair, ur spitting a little too fast, if u slowed it down a little, i could make out the words a little better. flow was pretty good man, u kept the emotion up, but it sounded as if u jumbled words together.
7/10, great lyrics, too fast

i think the flow is on par with biterphobia

[MC Anonymous]

hmm, beat sounds familiar, lol.
beats a little low in the beginning, but i like the intro.

the verse was fair, ur spitting a little too fast, if u slowed it down a little, i could make out the words a little better. flow was pretty good man, u kept the emotion up, but it sounded as if u jumbled words together.
7/10, great lyrics, too fast

i think the flow is on par with biterphobia

Thanks bro

[Emadyville]

The way it started was hard to understand, then like lines 6-10 maybe you were really clear, that was your best part, flow was a little too fast, and you def jumbled words together near the end to the point I couldn't understand barely even readin the lyrics cause you were spittin so fast, if you slow it down and make your words clear this could much better, def has potential, good work tho I like to see you tryin new flows and shit.

[Tornado]

Ok, first time i'm checking you solo so ok.
your lyrics are good, especially for someone as young as you, but sounds like you got a major lisp which makes it hard to understand, and if you get asthma, the flow became sloopy aswell..i suggest using less syllables o evry line and make a conscious effort to pronnounce your words more clearly. Also, sounded like you needed stabs aswell on the track