Fruity Loops I Eat'em

[survce]

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[DelinQuent]

fucking reverb, WAY too much, i literally can only understand 1-2 words per line.

so to be honest, it was fucking awful but i can tell you're new to the game.

so some tips, step up the delivery, turn the reverb WAY the fuck down or just completely off. then post it again so we can actually hear whats being said.

[survce]

Have no idea why you get reverb I did'nt add 1 drop to it. Hmmm. Makes me wonder bout the sight I used. anyway I produced the instrumental and I only have one verse right now. It is as follows.

All ways and forever clever never under the weather
Anybody whenever, wherever, whichever, whoever
We hell bent leather birds of a feather flocking together
So well spent every cent making a dent meant paying the rent
No one man can make you feel inferior without your consent
Feeling a little bit crazy today baby maybe you phase me
Concealing a riddle revealing what's really chilling in the middle
First letter my header couldn't be better cutting the cheddar
The Scarlet Letter embedded in her sweater nope I never
Met her better forget her regret her set her free let it be
I guaranty you defiantly don't want to be no wanna b
Just take a look and turn to me and tell me honestly if
That this is someone that you want to spend eternity with
And if so don't waste no time to make her your beloved wife
Just give it time she'll be pissed off in the kitchen with a knife
Coming at you saying you ain't nothing but a fucking so your ducking


p.s. I will work on gettin the audio fixed. Thanks & peace

[DelinQuent]

not sure what you mean when you say "the sight i used"

but the reverb i speak of is all the echoes on EVERY single word. thats what reverb does if used incorrectly.

but i didnt know you produced this, the beat was eh, not bad tho.

keep at it, give some people feedback and i'm sure others will be glad to help you out with the mixing