Some shit..

[MC Anonymous]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/581964067d2e378c/

Lyrical thesis will smash you into pieces, spittin diseases
leave you with creases, believe it, I'll make you dry as the beaches
my teachers teaches the preaches of the awesome lyrical slaughter
A mystical author, pardon the coffin offer, I'm coughin sulfer
a sorcerer, I take hip-hop and torture her, I'm a porche
with inertia to hurt ya, burst ya, split your medula and curse ya
let me verse ya, trap you into my lyrical, it's spiritual
you rhymes are so typical, I'll hit a few like I perform a gat ritual
it's that material, my killings are serial, I'm feeling that power
devour your hours, spittin' sour flames, green and blue inferno towers
I bathe in a blood shower, use MC's tounges to wipe my ass
fight the class of wack MC's and pass the right to smash
to my writing stash, I fight and bash anyone who challanges
leave damages to musical engineers, my punchlines just ravages
try to savage this, I'll repair my drive to flow like the internet
asking me where the embers went, I make weather in november bent
I'll execute the execution, put text in motion, slice off ya dome
dice with the chrome, now you in a zone where you all alone
One last thing I just want to say, suck my damn D I C K

[Solace]

That was pretty dope dude. Flow most noticably fell off here:

I'm coughin sulfer
a sorcerer, I take hip-hop and torture her, I'm a porche
with inertia to hurt ya, burst ya, split your medula and curse ya
let me verse ya, trap you into my lyrical,

Sick lyrics...Sick sick lyrics. Loved the ending dude haha. This goes in with your dope tracks with My Life As It Was Written, Battle My Enemies and Three Stages of Death.

[MC Anonymous]

That was pretty dope dude. Flow most noticably fell off here:

I'm coughin sulfer
a sorcerer, I take hip-hop and torture her, I'm a porche
with inertia to hurt ya, burst ya, split your medula and curse ya
let me verse ya, trap you into my lyrical,

Sick lyrics...Sick sick lyrics. Loved the ending dude haha. This goes in with your dope tracks with My Life As It Was Written, Battle My Enemies and Three Stages of Death.

Haha thanks man, just wanted to goof around and try to record something in one take, this is what came out of it.

[MsZ_RoCkEtTe]

That was good

[Jay-19]

Lyrical thesis will smash you into pieces, spittin diseases
leave you with creases, believe it, I'll make you dry as the beaches
my teachers teaches the preaches of the awesome lyrical slaughter
A mystical author, pardon the coffin offer, I'm coughin sulfer

My internet is acting up, so I can't listen to it, but damn man I love the lyrics!
That's some evil shit right there man!

[MC Anonymous]

Lyrical thesis will smash you into pieces, spittin diseases
leave you with creases, believe it, I'll make you dry as the beaches
my teachers teaches the preaches of the awesome lyrical slaughter
A mystical author, pardon the coffin offer, I'm coughin sulfer

My internet is acting up, so I can't listen to it, but damn man I love the lyrics!
That's some evil shit right there man!

Thanks man, I think I did well when you hear it

[Jay-19]

Just listened to it man and it was good.
Flow was off at times, but nothing major.

You tend to rush some of your lines like crazy man. Shorten them down a little bit and your skills at flowing will improve drastically.

But good job man!

[beeUbeeZ]

well...not my favorite kind of lyrics...but i liked the fast talking thing :]