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Proven.

Postby MC Anonymous » Apr 5th, '09, 19:53

http://www.zshare.net/audio/58235609b6ae7998/

Little do I know, when I'm spittin at my show
when I'm grippin' at these goals I slip and fall so slow
I'm appauled but I know, the only show I present
is my mind's audiance, which also rerpesents
the detested looks I get when I speak my mind
I proceed this time, to slip in a casket, blind
I ask my grind, if I have life left in me
my cleft is touching my knees, I cry and bleed
you decide my need, is useless, worthless
so if I burst this, will you then appreciate my verses?
Do I have to add curses, vulgarity, destruction
must I be a figure of curruption, blow up this junction
explode with agression, I hardly think I should comprimise
with lies, slander, anger, or I should prompt a fight
to make you understand, my style is my own
on the Microphone, like DQ I spit to my heart's tone
anger sparks bones, a tony stark clone, alone
A genius with the mind, but spittin' deaf stones
McMaybe, James R, Sa Diablo,respect
cause if you didn't help me, I would never expect
To be the verbal tech, I developed to today
you all showed me the way, Now I'm here to stay
spittin my thoughts, feelings, numbness I'm feeling
the reeling mind is just as dangerous as life stealing
in the bottomless pits, an abyss I miss
cold heartedness in the mist, expeled by spit
I felt my wrist, the viens blue, heart pumping ice
I start jumping, why, the lumping isn't nice
a poet in a seat, defeated, quill feather is heat
the weather is sleet, everything is better when weak
the letters I speak, is experienced to the elite
at the speed of light, my mind can't keep up with me
I carry a disease, as scary as these nightmare dreams
I really fight bare streams, my flow dives in steams
I get burned, skin melts off from the shame
guns to blame, give birth to my lyrics, my son's a game
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Proven.

Postby Spyder » Apr 5th, '09, 21:04

crazy dude, ur one of the best on here and my mentor, keep it up dude :y:
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Re: Proven.

Postby MC Anonymous » Apr 5th, '09, 21:20

Spyder wrote:crazy dude, ur one of the best on here and my mentor, keep it up dude :y:

Thanks man, I appreciate the props bro. You know I will continue to release music, no matter what :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Proven.

Postby Solace » Apr 6th, '09, 01:56

I tbh didnt like this track. Lyrics were good but iunno the flow felt odd to me. It seemed like you were gunna go with a certain rhyme scheme and then you dont. The lyrics/structure looks fine when I read it but flow was weird for me. Keeping doing it man. One more thing, mixing could be fixed. Most of the time I usually just hear your vocals and the instrumental. Maybe some dub or overlays or echos in some point? Anyways, just a meh track from you in my opinion. Keep at it dude :y:
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