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I Ain't Perfect (AUDIO) E.T.H.A.N.I.C.E

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I Ain't Perfect (AUDIO) E.T.H.A.N.I.C.E

Postby shadypelkey » Dec 10th, '05, 23:00

ya once again, another little audio I did, still bad quality and all but its another go at it :D tell me what ya'll think aiiight

http://s40.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0YOC ... 9ZJ72SIL2T

Lyrics:
ahhh fuck
I never..tried twice to do something right
if I did it did once then I did it it right
physc, I ain't no perfect mother fucker
I'm like the rest of them band of brothers
I like it once take a chance and get stanced for another
waiting for my chance to advance
but still the odds are against like a kick in the pants
they say for me to take it like a man
but I wanna take it like a woman....
oh shit what the fuck am I sayin nah I'm just playin
my mind feels like its generating pain again
everything wise just turned into a fuckin game again
knifes and everything sharp just sliced in my main vein
everyone I knew and loved just turned into a fuckin grain
counting them back like they was right on my lap, it's slang
and I'm makin attacks reformed by the general in name
5 stars red white and blue subract the white and the blue
and you got canadian fools who always say eh, so they say
you blinded by your own ways, go back and you lose
take 2 cause the day where I start to give a fuck
will be the day where they gotta save me in a fire truck
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Postby Vettori » Dec 11th, '05, 06:07

Nice shit man, I have to point out the last 2 bars fucked up a lil, But I like it...Keep goin at this....I Wanna here more LMAO...
Peace for now Bro

"Faith"
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Postby xariuss » Dec 11th, '05, 14:34

nice nice... that was actually hot yo... nice flow

and for fucken sake faith quit saying "FAITH" you try hard motherfucker.. it's so anoying, if it's a subliminal way of getting on my nervs it's fucken working
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Postby Vettori » Dec 11th, '05, 16:35

LMAO, I'm sorry But I don't do My shit Subliminally...Now...The reason i do that.....It's like My other Sig....I Like to put it there....I havn't Heard anyone else Complain about it...Iv'e been Doing it forever....And all of a sudden you think it's to piss you off, MAn check ya facts...I'm Out.....and dude make an audio I don't care...I'm not gonna say it's shit Just because wer'e "Beefin" lol....Do it up, I like listning to new shit....But w/e Take it easy As i sayd before Nice Raps andrew

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Postby ThomasAguanis » Dec 11th, '05, 17:03

i like it. your audios seem to get better every time you post one.
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 11th, '05, 19:11

yeh its good, its the first of your audios ive herd and youve created a nice sound


I havn't Heard anyone else Complain about it...Iv'e been Doing it forever....


lol ive always found it kinda anoyin too but ill prolly get over it :p
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Postby shadypelkey » Dec 11th, '05, 20:54

thanx yo, appreciated :D
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Postby Coccoa » Dec 11th, '05, 21:23

How come everyone wants to do audios now?

Where that audio section????????????????????????? :'( :'( :'(
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nice!

Postby em16 » Dec 16th, '05, 10:12

nice shit man.. :D
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Postby shadypelkey » Dec 16th, '05, 16:56

thanx yo
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