beat is yucky
hook is funny lmfao. good delivery on it.
first verse has a nice ass delivery, spat in your coffee, pissed in your food lmfao. this is a nice verse, i enjoyed it but i felt the flow was a little boring.
all women ARE whores... just so you know lmfao. i liked the first verse better than the second but this verse was still decent.
overall 7/10 due to a boring flow and a not-so-catchy hook. rhyming was very simple, but i enjoy simple so thats a compliment when it comes from me lol. keep at it my dude

EDIT-@Tash, i think what ax meant is you post a single comment saying it basically reminds you of kim, yet you fail to go into any detail that would actually help the guy get better.