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Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby Tornado » Apr 4th, '09, 15:02

I Like that's it your single and not conforming to the typical single, the beat is ok,just feels a bit empty, i know it's supposed to be simple but it feels emplty like i said.

I really do think it's a excellent job 9/10 worthy, only reason it's not 10 cos of the beat butyeh, i'll be bumping this for days
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 5th, '09, 00:23

Tornado wrote:I Like that's it your single and not conforming to the typical single, the beat is ok,just feels a bit empty, i know it's supposed to be simple but it feels emplty like i said.

I really do think it's a excellent job 9/10 worthy, only reason it's not 10 cos of the beat butyeh, i'll be bumping this for days



Thanks man, appreciated! :y:
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby Young Luc » Apr 5th, '09, 00:43

hey man tht was pretty good when yu coming out wit another single?
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby Tash8 » Apr 5th, '09, 06:36

Big Ax-D wrote:
Jay-19 wrote:Hey, I try to stand out... ;)


don't worry bout him... you will never get decent feed from him

keep doin ya thang man :y:


your right,

"10/10!!! AMAZING!! KEEPP IT UPWSDFA@!#@$@!" is soooooo much better

Jay-19 wrote:Hey, I try to stand out... ;)


I never said that was bad, I simply put in perceptive how I perceived this track--a hardcore song with a feeling similar to that of which Kim by Eminem gives. It can be a positive thing or a negative thing, depending on how you feel about the comparisons between the two.
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 5th, '09, 12:20

^ I didn't take it in a negative way.
I was just saying I try to stand out, and will do things a lot of other rappers would not do.
For example putting out a track like this as first single.
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby DelinQuent » Apr 5th, '09, 21:41

beat is yucky

hook is funny lmfao. good delivery on it.

first verse has a nice ass delivery, spat in your coffee, pissed in your food lmfao. this is a nice verse, i enjoyed it but i felt the flow was a little boring.

all women ARE whores... just so you know lmfao. i liked the first verse better than the second but this verse was still decent.

overall 7/10 due to a boring flow and a not-so-catchy hook. rhyming was very simple, but i enjoy simple so thats a compliment when it comes from me lol. keep at it my dude :y:


EDIT-@Tash, i think what ax meant is you post a single comment saying it basically reminds you of kim, yet you fail to go into any detail that would actually help the guy get better.
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby FDL » Apr 5th, '09, 22:17

Where Do You Get The Beats??

If You Make This , Do You Sen To Me A Hot Hot Hot Beat From My New LP , Break The Time??¿

I Search One Hot Beat!
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 6th, '09, 00:47

DelinQuent wrote:beat is yucky

hook is funny lmfao. good delivery on it.

first verse has a nice ass delivery, spat in your coffee, pissed in your food lmfao. this is a nice verse, i enjoyed it but i felt the flow was a little boring.

all women ARE whores... just so you know lmfao. i liked the first verse better than the second but this verse was still decent.

overall 7/10 due to a boring flow and a not-so-catchy hook. rhyming was very simple, but i enjoy simple so thats a compliment when it comes from me lol. keep at it my dude :y:


EDIT-@Tash, i think what ax meant is you post a single comment saying it basically reminds you of kim, yet you fail to go into any detail that would actually help the guy get better.



That's what I said. Maybe wasn't so clear but if you listen closely, you'll hear it.
Thanks for the feed though, very much appreciated! :happy:

@ FDL
Usually I just use free beats. You can easily find some hot beats on http://www.soundclick.com. :y:
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby FDL » Apr 6th, '09, 15:08

Thanks :y:
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby Xray » Apr 11th, '09, 16:07

I agree with Chet it wasn't a spectacular single but it the job done for me cause I know theres gonna great J-19 songs on there. It's quiet hard to choose your first single when you don't wanna give away your best song before your tape drops so don't worry about it man. Not your average good Jay song but it was alright. You usually use good beats but this one not so much but all good though, looking forward to your tape.

sorry for the late feed.
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby KDEWolf » Apr 12th, '09, 06:38

not feelin it sorry
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Re: Jay-19 - Die Bitch (First single)

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 12th, '09, 18:23

Thanks for the feed Chet and Saj! :y:
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