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Metamorphosis; Promo

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Metamorphosis; Promo

Postby MC Anonymous » Apr 12th, '09, 03:32

Promo track from my upincoming album.. Vocabology

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5851206503b40757/

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ts0MI69cOo

Darkness above ashes, lashes and gashes
metamorphosis, pychosis can't match this
with tactics, I prepare against this one war
attackin' and crackin' is what this gun's for
to fractions with actions, I blow you away
fuck dieing, I'm trying to show me a way
with research and these burts, I leave dirt
and appear with no fear, I believe earth
strapped on the gat, a broke laundry mat
I spoke, hardly masked, I woke a hearty past
this evil verses good, darkness vs light
the dog in the shadows, barkless but bites
I'm being possesed, just dressed in a vest
tested positive for death, in a vortex I invest
when a mineral is left, I exceed all bets
appear again, life gone, I'm met

Spiritual, mental, physical visuals
death haunts, every single individual
grab on to your blood, your own life liquid
remind yourself, life is drained by minutes

Haunting figures, spittin' leaves with spine shivers
mind's thinner, eyes littered when my time whittered
in the mirror, I see her, another reflection
insanity is panning me, with no detection
I can't stop, these chants pop my own ear drums
is fear numb, I'm near slums with wierd bums
with speared gums, I haunt memories lane
no fight, tonight, I bring in the renegade
breaking barriers, I'm scared of her, mother earth
for me to survive, I kill her brother first
a spirit death, nothing is left, karma is wiped
armor is swiped, nothing is near the light
I fear the sight, I feel my body rise in the skies
then striked down, by my god's hand in disguise
I wonder why, as I comet down from the heavens
the impact, I then learned humanities' lesson

Spiritual, mental, physical visuals
death haunts, every single individual
grab on to blood, your own life liquid
remind yourself, life is drained by minutes
Last edited by MC Anonymous on Apr 12th, '09, 03:39, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Metamorphosis; Promo

Postby Solace » Apr 12th, '09, 03:34

This is just fucking amazing; I love it. :worship:
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Re: Metamorphosis; Promo

Postby DelinQuent » Apr 12th, '09, 03:37

flow is very weird, but it kinda works.

barkless but bites, sick line. flow fucks up pretty big toward end of first verse.

hook is decent, not very catchy tho.

I'm scared of her, mother earth
for me to survive, I kill her brother first-SICK

gotta fix the overlays on the end of the verse there, they ruin the verse for me.

also fix the last hook, it sounded off.

overall 7/10, not my style but the lyrics were strong as usual. waiting for the album, keep at it my dude.
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Re: Metamorphosis; Promo

Postby Requiem » Apr 12th, '09, 04:05

nice job, i fed on msn but fuckin sick man :worship:
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Re: Metamorphosis; Promo

Postby Makaveli525 » Apr 12th, '09, 06:27

Well, that was the creepiest track I've heard in a minute.

lol... on the real though, you have more emotion that anyone I've ever heard rapping.

The lyrics were nice, they came together well...

The flow was really choppy though, gotta watch that.

And the doubles were way off. If you're gonna re-spit the whole verse under it, at least go back and line shit up... lol

Overall, nice job, it's alot better than the last time I heard you spit.
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Re: Metamorphosis; Promo

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 12th, '09, 12:14

who mixed this?....lyrics are up to par again..your pronouncation is a up and down as chet said...
flow does its job.....i dont like your delievery..it doesnt fit the beat and its more like screaming...(kind of)....hook came out nice...good rhyme sheme..made it more catchy :y: but stil could be a lil more relaxed
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Re: Metamorphosis; Promo

Postby Xray » Apr 12th, '09, 12:32

I don't know what the rest mean, this track is dope. Your best song so far, your pronounciation might sound clearer than your other tracks on this. But I still find it really hard to understand you, I don't know why. Delivery was strong, energetic shit. I would have flowed completely different to you on this beat, so I found the flow interesting, it was good. Beat is really good man, holy shit where'd you find this?

Anyways this is your best song so far for me, keep it up homie. :y:
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Re: Metamorphosis; Promo

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 12th, '09, 21:35

damn im diggin your voice on this

flow was great ,..i see you have gotten better with that

lyrics as always top fuckin notch

beat was a good choice...

i loved the hook dude

great song...8/10
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Re: Metamorphosis; Promo

Postby Robbie G » Apr 12th, '09, 22:28

Your accent and themes kinda reminds me of Sajjad. :y:

Dope song dude, you'll be sick some day.
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