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We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

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We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 14th, '09, 05:04

this is a Remix/Parody of Eminem's We Made You with TR members :smoking:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/586200731a468918/

i put alot of work into this, i appreciate any feed :y:

Lyrics:

We Paid You

Chorus (alysha)

When u walk through that door, it was clear to me, (clear to me)
Ur the one they adore, who they come to see. (come to see)
Dude’s cocks be hard, everybody wants u, (wants u)
Slut bucket, but who could really blame u
That’s why most the money comes from you (we paid you)

Verse 1 (ice killa)

Back by popular demand, pop a little anthrax, or some acid if you can
I’m ready to tackle any fat looking man, how does it feel to smack his double chin?
Well look at all the blasted masses in the stands,
No lady’s man, don’t ask out all the fans.
Damn, I think kez kardashian’s a man,
He stomped him, just because he asked to put his hands,
On his massive, genitalia again.
Squeeze him then switch him, and pass him to SajN
Can I come back as nasty as eminem? Yes I can, can, don’t ask me this again.
and I don’t mean to lesbian offend.
but Sophie, please go back to seein men, Miranda’s a 2, ur practically a 10.
I know u want me girl, in fact I see ya grin. Now come in girl….

Chorus


Verse 2 (ice killa)

The Blow Torcher, looking for more men to torcher,
Welcome to the hottest guy then, Charlie horse her.
Sorry omar, but what does Anonymous
Have that I don’t, Are you sayin u slept with him?
Well I can be hard as metal, and boost like adrenaline.
Now give me my inhaler, and a shot of some cinnamon,
And I’ll invite MC Maybe out to dinner then,
Nail him, Maybe say hello to my little friend.
O Sticcy, cave in, let’s cut out the middle men.
Forget medicine, u’ll end up in the hospital again
This time it won’t be for the M & M binge,
Forget women man, don’t pay them any kind of attention.
And little did I mention, gutawafang’s in love with me Rain Matrix, so sit on the bench.
Man I swear those other guys, u give em an inch, they take a mile, they got style, but it doesn’t slip.

Verse 3 (ice killa)

And that’s why, Spyda, can u never live without,
I know u want me man, cuz I can see u checkin me out.
And baby, u kno, u kno u want me too,
Don’t try to deny it baby I’m the only one for u.

Damn girl, my hair sticks up like Alfalfa,
You want me to wash my filthy mouth out?
You think that’s bad, You should hear Chet Starr’s album,
Never has their been so much smoking around ya,
And AspirinE, I don’t mean to mess with ur gal but,
But Angie put her breasts in my mouth bro,
Wowsers, I just jizzed in my trousers,
And they wonder why I stay up for hours,
Lord help us, he just stole Em’s Alf shirt,
Runnin like OJ with that outfit.
I think I’m bout to flip, all of ya rest assured James R. will rescue ya.
Can you blame me, you’re my xray, I’m your Jay,
Matter of fact Ax-D make me a cake,
With a saw blade in it to leave Bar baked.
Baby I think u just met ur soul mate, now break it down girl.
Last edited by Requiem on Apr 14th, '09, 05:21, edited 6 times in total.
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Slovinec » Apr 14th, '09, 05:08

9/10 better then some crap with no flow on this forum good job
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 14th, '09, 05:14

BizarreKId wrote:9/10 better then some crap with no flow on this forum good job


^thx man, appreciate it :happy:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Apr 14th, '09, 05:23

Fuck you to
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 14th, '09, 05:26

did u listen to the track :unsure:

lmao sticcy :flower:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Nick419 » Apr 14th, '09, 05:37

it was alright, the lyrics are pretty much identical to em's u just have the names switched n the lines a lil diff. here and there other than that its pretty much like listening to karaoke of the real song : /lol
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Requiem » Apr 14th, '09, 05:39

^@ chet :worship: great review man, and lol. thx for that. i'll definitely try doing it again. :y: the fast rapping i mean. i think i'm done with parodies :sweating:

@ Nick
thx man, lol at karioke line :smoking:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby _Ironic_ » Apr 14th, '09, 05:47

hahaha, this was nice. I think you would have done it better than eminem if you didn't repeat so many of his lines. this was a nice drop though... 8/10 :y:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Apr 14th, '09, 08:19

haha it was better than i expected i liked the flow and hey man the song turned out great overall :y:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby SajN » Apr 14th, '09, 10:00

Lol, pretty nice :y:
Even though you copied most of the lyrics..


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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Xray » Apr 14th, '09, 10:06

Fuck making a parody, that shit is only for the weak aka those that don't know how to make an original song from scratch. You ever hear of a rapper making a parody? no. I didn't think it was funny, I hated the original and hate this one even more. Quit that parody shit man its annoying. I mean I take music seriously, if I ever wanna laugh I watch a show or a comedy movie or something, leave the music for the real shit. Now to get in little bit of detail.

Lyrics were wack, Alysha on the hook was horrible, she can't sing/flow for shit on that beat, her flow was waaaaaaaaaaay off. Delivery was weak as hell. Your delivery was good but I felt your flow was off abit to. Like I said this isn't my type of shit, and I don't think it should be for anyone that takes music seriously.
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby SajN » Apr 14th, '09, 10:13

Xray wrote:Fuck making a parody, that shit is only for the weak aka those that don't know how to make an original song from scratch. You ever hear of a rapper making a parody? no. I didn't think it was funny, I hated the original and hate this one even more. Quit that parody shit man its annoying. I mean I take music seriously, if I ever wanna laugh I watch a show or a comedy movie or something, leave the music for the real shit. Now to get in little bit of detail.

Lyrics were wack, Alysha on the hook was horrible, she can't sing/flow for shit on that beat, her flow was waaaaaaaaaaay off. Delivery was weak as hell. Your delivery was good but I felt your flow was off abit to. Like I said this isn't my type of shit, and I don't think it should be for anyone that takes music seriously.

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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Jay-19 » Apr 14th, '09, 10:52

The song itself isn't good, but the lyrics are pretty funny.

Even though you just copied Eminem's flow and whole style on this track you had problems to stay on beat, you know? Like the flow was really fucked up at some parts.

Sometimes you rushed your lyrics so badly I couldn't understand what you said, so thank God you posted the lyrics.

I think you should have chosen another beat, which isn't as fast as this one, or maybe just changed the flow on the beat, because this didn't suit you at all man.

No hate, just giving feedback.
Though I won't lie, I laughed at the lyrics at some parts. :y:
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Kez » Apr 14th, '09, 15:34

Your reception for this song depends about 60% on whether they liked the original song to be honest.

Xray hated it, and it shows.

I'll admit i laughed at the lyrics, but that's only because it was Eminem's ideas with our names substituted.

This aint an easy flow to do, as much as Eminem makes it look so, and there are times in this song you fall off it completely. The second verse in particular sounds like you mixed your verse a second late.

Your delivery aint bad at times, and the quality sounds okay.

But still this is far from perfect.

Oh, and you can not sing at all, i'm sorry. It just sounded bad.
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Re: We Paid You (feat. Alysha)

Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '09, 20:43

omg this was hilarious, i loved it. with the exception of the shitty as chorus... but i laughed ahahahha.
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