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Postby Casper_1111 » Dec 7th, '05, 18:25

Forget this shit that i spit when i was drunk//
cause theres nothing you can do when act like a punk and get sprayed by a skunk//
Through this game ill be the greatest mc that youll never be//
its me the rapper from jane and finch see//
cause us crips get down like dem franchise boys get money//
ha ha ha back in this black leather jacket rockin blue to my crew//
and then all of a door apears out of no where its true//
i ran in to it and flew, out the other side//
in my hood we ride till we die and fuck till we bus//
nothing like a 40 that we have to share among us//
i am almost done just let me fallback//
cause MY NINE IS GETTIN HEAVY AND THATS ALL

CRACK
i shall not fuck wit ros c popper, hear my gun burst louder then the sound of a chopper, whats this homie, i got 2 ounces in my backpack so bounce back before i let my gun go clickity clak, bam bam let the fire go and than run my my gun son cause them road runners rushin at me so bring the flames ~1~
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Postby Trigger » Dec 7th, '05, 21:42

gettin betta lmfao ...betta then ur other...keep it up yo :D
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Postby walend » Dec 7th, '05, 22:51

you need more practice :dumbell:
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^^^^^^ Basically my intrests
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Postby Trigger » Dec 8th, '05, 04:39

did u write this one with out drugs lmfao :happy:
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Postby shadysoldiergrl » Dec 8th, '05, 04:46

that was pretty good! on a scale of 1-10 i would rate it an 8 1/2 :king:
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Postby Casper_1111 » Dec 12th, '05, 16:51

walend wrote:you need more practice :dumbell:
Dude i was drunk nigga think if i wasnt read more in creative writing i write alot
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Postby walend » Dec 12th, '05, 17:04

Casper_1111 wrote:
walend wrote:you need more practice :dumbell:
Dude i was drunk ***** think if i wasnt read more in creative writing i write alot


Hey i'm not a *****
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Postby RI$KY REPPIN EN3 » Dec 13th, '05, 12:10

walend wrote:you need more practice :dumbell:
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Postby Casper_1111 » Jan 2nd, '06, 22:24

my bad homie iam just pissed off man still no beef right~1~
i shall not fuck wit ros c popper, hear my gun burst louder then the sound of a chopper, whats this homie, i got 2 ounces in my backpack so bounce back before i let my gun go clickity clak, bam bam let the fire go and than run my my gun son cause them road runners rushin at me so bring the flames ~1~
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