Jumpoff

[DelinQuent]

everyone on here will hate this i'm guessing, but fuck it. this is a song that's been on my myspace for a few weeks, but i havent posted it here.

This will be Track 1 on my upcoming album entitled "Dreams of Nightmares"

http://www.myspace.com/iamDelinquent

or

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5945565895d6d12b/

no lyrics, i rap at an easy to follow pace, so you should be able to understand the words.

feed it, love it, hate it, fuck it. just tell me your opinion.

[preest]

not bad man, I'm liking your wordplay and your flow and I like the way you voice changes from hard to soft throughout.

the only thing for me was I didnt know if you was trying to make this like a single or a album filler or what. it's got kind of a commecial potential but still sounds dark in a strange kind of way lol.

I like it though, good job

[DelinQuent]

my album contains no 'fillers' lol

this is more the single type of song.

thanks for your opinion, i appreciate it

[threeandtwenty]

i can see why preest thought this was a filler...didnt mind it,but it was too typically a swagga boasting song.(flow like wayne on some parts?)

dont get me wrong..i think it was good on the flow delivery front,very good..just doesnt seem to fit as first single for an album called dreams of nightmares lol.depends on what kind of an idea you want to portray about your album before release i guess.

[dbeauluvswomen]

ha, i like this. very enjoyable. i thought the hook was nice. I like the beat and you did well with it. cool lyrics..some funny. I've got no complaints. it was nice.

[DelinQuent]

the idea of the title "Dreams of Nightmares" is that, my dream is to rap. my dream is to get signed and be successful. but at the same time, i realize those dreams are very hard to attain, so they haunt me, similar to nightmares.

the idea with this being the first song ive released is to put out a song the masses will enjoy.

thanks for taking the time to listen, glad you guys enjoyed the delivery as that's what i focused mostly on.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

oh shit man DQ...that was nice man
am feelin it...indeed the delievery was decent and a bit above....not sure about the bridge? lol...your singin..meh
flow was nice too....lyrics were topic related..haha
too bad the mixing was up to par...no hate..but could be better...

[DelinQuent]

my singing? wtf? i didnt sing at all on this lmfao

edit- there was also no bridge lmfao

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i meant that part after the 1st hook...

[DelinQuent]

the part after the 1st hook goes "it's that jumpoff, yet they jump on/ clinging to my nuts, see the size of my balls?" there's no singing... lmfao. not sure what youre talking about

[SajN]

Very nice track!
I felt it, I dont think it was bad.

I like the hook

Nice delivery!

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the feed sajn.

i'll be sure to return the favor on the track of yours i just saw, gimme a few hours tho.

[B.A.D.]

I Love Vybe beats, excelent choice!!!!

I gotta say this is an EXCELENT track for a first single, very very good choice, also its good to have easy and naughty lyrics for a first single, and I Do enjoy this type of tracks.. .well I love them hahah

hell yeah, ama download this one, ama bump it a lot

not your best track, but its my favourite from you

"Dreams Of Nightmares".... I fucking definitively looking forward for it!!!

my only recomendation is, not making this track number 1 of the album, I suggest to open with a track that resumes the topic of the album...

but well.... 100/100.... beautifull muzik you made here

and yeah.... do what you want, that makes everyone better

[DelinQuent]

thanks ax.

i noticed with Sincerely Yours that i threw in a bunch of songs i hated just to try for positive feedback here. so the album is just gonna be me doing me. not trying to please anyone, just having fun while making music.

good call on not making this Track 1, i'll consider that point.

and yes, IMO vybe is currently the best on soundclick right now.

[B.A.D.]

not trying to please anyone, just having fun while making music.

then its gonna be the best album to ever hit TR

and you gonna love mine