Beat was smooth, I liked it. Just a tip on the intro: Next time if you make an intro don't, make sure your not nervous or don't think its corny, cause I know that's the reason why you both don't sound like your confident about the intro, yeah that kind of stuff drags down the songs outcome. And you don't need it really, either be confident, or just don't make an intro, nothing should be forced.
SajN I can see improvement on the flow and delivery, I feel a little more energy into first verse too which is good. When I read the first verse, I didn't like it, but once I heard it, it made sense. Concept wise you stood on point throughout the whole verse, but it was a little basic, but your on the right path atm. Good verse, better than your previous work. Chorus was mixed bad, cause it sounded very wet, and when you (C-Riz) recorded it, you went for a choir like outcome, and the wet mixing made it seem empty. Should of made it dry sounding, would of made it sound better.
C-Riz's verse, I felt the delivery, and the flow was on point. But your breathing was a problem, like it messed with the flow on some points, sorta delayed it abit. Need to work on your breathing or lower it down when mixing, cause your taking way to hard breaths for what your spitting. I mean you weren't even shouting, except you breathed like you were screaming your ass off you get me? Lyrics were good, I liked the verse with the exception of the breathing. Mixed really well though.
SajN you came back with a shaky verse, your delivery wasn't good as your first verse, and same with the flow. Kinda sounded nervous on this verse, but the lyrics are the same quality so good work on that. Didn't feel this verse much, but it wasn't too bad. I liked the song, it was mixed really well except the hook, but overall a good collab between you two. Good work.
