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[threeandtwenty]

ok,so next song.
In case anybody didnt get the topic and name of this song...it's Not about downing booze.
Beat just dance,Lady Gaga (yes,pop beat.not pop song.)

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http://www.zshare.net/audio/59865908f5287272/

Lyric
damn my girls getting ga ga's;
damn my girls getting ga ga's;does anybody forecast broken glass?

where are my keys,i lost my phone...the only dude on the floor not packing peptones.

listen...i know im not tyson
even if i did fist fight some bison
he could probably just beat my ass in
yeah im cool,thats the shit i live for
but i can't imagine you runnin to a car
would they,cop on you,when im on the floor
nothin i can do,well the next lines therefore

six feet six is the max with my fists
any bigger dude gets a bottle on lips
think thats rude well im confused too
what do i do when the next guy bumps you?

take his booze an drink it as an excuse

i try to fake it,but i kinda hate it
feels like im gettin my space invaded
and my click just isnt big enough
to take on some politician thug

shake a shot spoil the rug
shrug a match and get a firplug
black eyes are so out of style
the next fly guy can smoke awhile

massive dudes lookin at your waist
half a mind to rip half his face
i feel outclasses gimmie some teargas
jeyklle or hyde in a jason mask

botles up ,bottles up
bottles up,ive had too much

oh,peptones=protein drug compound

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

your rapping part went well....this beat makes me wanna shake it too..lol
nice nice....can feel a certain delievery now.. good step forward on that
lyrics nuttin special but nuttin THAT bad either...as i said...rapping part flowed well
the expanding/singing/interlude(whatever you call 'em) parts werent really my cup of tea

[preest]

I wasnt really feeling the track as a whole but I could hear potential!!the lyrics could be better, although I liked the line "it feels like I got my space invaded", flowed nice! the beat is from another track aint it? its nice anyways! the recording quality wasnt great but I'd imagine with better clearer quality it could work real well. I kinda thought that the voice you put on the track sounded a bit dark for a club type track! keep progressing

[threeandtwenty]

much propz chris and preest

I kinda thought that the voice you put on the track sounded a bit dark for a club type track! keep progressing

it isn't meant to be a club track...its about how i feel every time i go to a club with a girl (and not being a steroid pumped up dude,haha).

the title refers to the lines:
six feet six is the max with my fists
any bigger dude gets a bottle on the lips

the expanding/singing/interlude(whatever you call 'em) parts werent really my cup of tea

....the keys/phone first line was a cover on the original with different lyrics