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Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Kez » May 21st, '09, 18:08

Surprise.

Produced, featuring and mixed by Big Ax-D.

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Or listen/download on MySpace once it refreshes enough (give it some time)

Kez wrote:[Chorus]
I know you don't feel alright
Cause the wait has let you die
But i'm back dog, understand
I will take that spot of light
A new chance to hate on me
Cause i'm back, there's something here
I just let the demon free
Mr. Kez come bring that heat..

Back by popular demand,
Beginning my mixtape, i've got biter blood upon my hands
I'm back, that kid who finds salvation in razorblades
Who is more than fuckin qualified to take your hate
The Audio Stage has gone to crap and it's just sad
Say Ice Killa is a better rapper than SaJJad?
Shit's been dead since Ax is in the lab
And as for me, well, computers crashing, it's a damn bitch!
I'm back with my quality that makes your speakers
Break with fear, when they know my mixtape is near
Finally, i'm back, we can make the sequel
To Universal, see if it can out-rate The Prequel
You search fruitlessly to try and compare me
But you can't, cause i'm so damn unique that it's scary
I'm rap's fairy Godmother cause i spit magic
on the tracks that i make, and yeah, see, God i love it!

[Chorus]

I'm not like any other rapper you might see
That's why 99.9% of listeners don't like me
I'm hard to get into, but make me your enemy
And i'll turn this into Mortal Kombat and finish you
Diminish you, then cut up your body and turn it into stew
Invite your friends over so that now dinner's you
Okay, no. But it doesn't matter if it's true
To think of it is imaginitive, and that's why i am different to
Everything else out today, and in my absence withdrawal
Set in, i'd sleep uneasy and rap it was calling
It was screaming "Kez, bring me back to my glory"
Then it performed a miracle, and then magically it called me
A pioneer, a mixer of genres you find your ears
Cannot resist the shit, no matter how much you don't try to hear
The mute button is non-existent with my tracks
It fades away, so you can't fuckin click it, it's like (AHHHH!!)

[Chorus]

It's time for me to come and annoy you again
Fuck that, it's time for me to come destroy you again
I'll take my brain cells and deploy them again
To come up with some shit i can transfer fully to the pen
Disks are not even a form that do me justice
They'd break upon hearing the first puny drumbeat
I send reverbations throughout several stations
Of your defensive brain, but you can't stop me penetrating!
Drums bang inside my brain my heart switches frequency
I tear new arseholes, they need stitches frequently
My eyes dilate as i scream and start bitching needlessly
I spit so fucking often that's it's hard just to breathe you see
I'm back the absolutely heartless and mean MC
I bring such heat that even fucking arsonists fearing me
I'm comical, like fucking Bart Simpson's penis, see
Oh! Now come on, who really wants frigging beef with me?!

[Chorus]
[Chorus]
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby dbeauluvswomen » May 21st, '09, 18:46

That was great. Good production and Ax was cool on the hook. Kez you had a nice flow and great lyrics. Nice drop. :y:
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby DelinQuent » May 21st, '09, 19:05

damn kez, been waiting a loooong time for you to return.

flow is steady and dope, rhyming is nice. love the TR mention.

Diminish you, then cut up your body and turn it into stew
Invite your friends over so that now dinner's you

dope line lmfao. rhyming is great on this verse.

overlays are off on the third verse, nearly ever single one of them, fix it. dope verse again.

overall, nice hook, great verses. 8/10, GREAT way to make your return.
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby B.A.D. » May 21st, '09, 21:21

THE RETURN

welcome back man!!! :y: :y: :worship: save the forum from wack rappers like me :y:


amazin track!!
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Big_AxD_my_merzimen » May 21st, '09, 22:26

Omg I love this tune, Big Ax D makes me cum in my pants
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Xray » May 22nd, '09, 05:51

Lyrics were extremely corny specially the whole audio stage falling apart thing and than saying your back to make it better. It is sort of falling apart but your wrong, you said "Shit's been dead since Ax is in the lab" yeah his been working on his album BUT he constantly posts tracks every now and than so he never left. And who said Ice Killa is better than me? no one ever said that, I think that jab at ice was sad. I mean just cause you don't like his stuff, doesn't mean you can go around making accusations that he said his better than me or Im better than him. Cause Im cool with Ice Killa his developing like all of us that post shit here, so that was uncalled-for. Lyrics were basic if you minus some of the multis you have on there. Wasn't feeling the beat ax, that shit sounded like some jungle fever kid show melody, and drums were just basic and weak, I wouldn't call this a rap beat at all. As for the audio is wasn't bad, delivery wasn't good to tell you the truth, the flow seemed off alittle bit, I blame the beat though, that's not a rap beat. Welcome back you corny bastard.
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Slim Zaddy » May 22nd, '09, 09:30

actually it's good , i liked it , lyrics were fire .. but i did'nt like the beat ,., your delivery was good , but i did'nt like your flow . you were too fast , maybe if a little bit slower it would be fire .. but yeah you're good man ,, that's not your best track for me , but gd job ,, keep it up :y:
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Jay-19 » May 22nd, '09, 11:34

I pretty much agree with what Xray said.
All of it.
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 22nd, '09, 15:06

your quality was surprisingly good...good mixing on that i guess...
flow was good and steady...but nuttin amazing...
Eminem Comeback > Kez Comeback....lol
yeah didnt like the beat..sorry ax
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Tornado » May 22nd, '09, 15:39

Good to hear you back butfirstly, beat wasn't the best and sounded too fast for you like there was too many syllables on some lines and the quality was a little distorted so made it hard to understand. Don't really agree with the Audio Section reference but w/ever thats just opinion,
Overall not bad, some parts enjoyable but average
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Kez » May 22nd, '09, 15:54

Xray wrote:Lyrics were extremely corny specially the whole audio stage falling apart thing and than saying your back to make it better. It is sort of falling apart but your wrong, you said "Shit's been dead since Ax is in the lab" yeah his been working on his album BUT he constantly posts tracks every now and than so he never left. And who said Ice Killa is better than me? no one ever said that, I think that jab at ice was sad. I mean just cause you don't like his stuff, doesn't mean you can go around making accusations that he said his better than me or Im better than him. Cause Im cool with Ice Killa his developing like all of us that post shit here, so that was uncalled-for. Lyrics were basic if you minus some of the multis you have on there. Wasn't feeling the beat ax, that shit sounded like some jungle fever kid show melody, and drums were just basic and weak, I wouldn't call this a rap beat at all. As for the audio is wasn't bad, delivery wasn't good to tell you the truth, the flow seemed off alittle bit, I blame the beat though, that's not a rap beat. Welcome back you corny bastard.


Always like that you give the most honest feed. Not saying other people are lying but Xray just doesn't give a fuck.

I put the Ice Killa line in because, truthfully, i think he is getting far too much positive attention than his music has earned. You say he's still improving, precicsely; hence, he's not in a position for him to be called a "king" or to be praised like he is. The likes of me and you went through loads of bullshit when we started out. So should he. And if i have to be the only one to say it, i will. I also do truly believe the audio stage is in a fucking terrible state. I'm not egotistic enough to claim my music will "save the audio stage", but certainly my attitude is set to return now that i can actually give people feedback, and that is what i meant by that lyric. Also you're taking the lyrics a bit literally there: i never said Ax left, i said he was in the lab, i.e. working on an album so he didn't really have time to post much music or feed much music.

As for the rest of it, well i'm sorry it wasn't to your taste i suppose. As for the beat that's Ax's perogative.

And to all, cheers for checking the song.

@C-Riz, dunno what the difference in quality would be as i'm still using the same mic. Ax mixed it so that's probably the reason.
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby James R. » May 22nd, '09, 16:31

I don't like the beat at all. Doesn't sound like a rap beat to me.

Lyrics were cool. I don't think they're spectacular or anything, but they're definitely above the TR average. The flow however was very awkward. Some lines were jam packed with syllables and others you were stopping and pausing all through them to make it fit. That inconsistency was pretty consistent throughout the track. Delivery was fine.

Good track overall. Would have probably been better on a different beat. Good to see you back in audio. You gonna go listen to The SajN and C-Riz Show now? Lmao
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Kez » May 22nd, '09, 16:52

James R. wrote:You gonna go listen to The SajN and C-Riz Show now? Lmao


Already done my friend

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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Tash8 » May 22nd, '09, 17:07

really wack beat, hook was decent, kez u killed it but your volume should have been a bit louder... great verses but the lyrics are kinda ewww like sajjad said... really don't rap about the audio stage that's just ... yea.... anyways flow was nice.. soo good job on that.. i'm really glad u got ur shit back, maybe we can get back to working.
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby mcZu » May 22nd, '09, 18:15

Flow was nice; however, you slured alott of words, which resulted in your flow being off at some points. Delivery was 'strange', dunno why, but it might be the vocals which should have been louder. Beat was not my cup of tea; however, it sounded fresh.
Lyrics are really basic shit, you did bring your point across, but you could have used some similes, metaphors and some punches to make it a bit more appealing. Though like James said, it's above the Tr average. Hook sounded catchy, I liked it.

Overal I think this song is not bad, but not spectaculair either, glad to see you have fixed your audio. It's a long time coming that I have heard something from you.
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