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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Solace » May 23rd, '09, 01:27

I really enjoyed this track. Glad your able to record again dude. Your voice kinda sounded different since your previous tracks imo, a little deeper. I enjoyed the flow but I think a better beat would have made this lightyears ahead of its current state. The lyrics were dope in the sense of getting out your point but I don't think it was lyrical but you pulled it off. Big Ax-D's hook was nice. Can't wait for Universal 2.0!
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby <Stiiccy> » May 23rd, '09, 04:14

i fuckin loved this song...

In fact i enjoyed this better than We Made You..considering there both come-back songs..

The melody you carried through out the song was flawless...The fact you had the whole "smart ass" theme through the entire song was great...

lyrics were really good..i enjoyed them..

beat was ok ..

hook was decent...

this was great song man :y:
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby B.A.D. » May 23rd, '09, 09:44

delete this post

srry for my drunkness
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby randomghost » May 23rd, '09, 19:26

mm..nice beat....good hook from x.....damn kez ya sound to different bro :o :o love the mixing....lyrics is hot...i love this uk accent :p nice flow....energitc style...love it....good stuff..keep them comin man.... :y: lmao at the screaming hahaha :p good stuff..loved the track :smoking:
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Xray » May 24th, '09, 00:36

Kez wrote:
Xray wrote:Lyrics were extremely corny specially the whole audio stage falling apart thing and than saying your back to make it better. It is sort of falling apart but your wrong, you said "Shit's been dead since Ax is in the lab" yeah his been working on his album BUT he constantly posts tracks every now and than so he never left. And who said Ice Killa is better than me? no one ever said that, I think that jab at ice was sad. I mean just cause you don't like his stuff, doesn't mean you can go around making accusations that he said his better than me or Im better than him. Cause Im cool with Ice Killa his developing like all of us that post shit here, so that was uncalled-for. Lyrics were basic if you minus some of the multis you have on there. Wasn't feeling the beat ax, that shit sounded like some jungle fever kid show melody, and drums were just basic and weak, I wouldn't call this a rap beat at all. As for the audio is wasn't bad, delivery wasn't good to tell you the truth, the flow seemed off alittle bit, I blame the beat though, that's not a rap beat. Welcome back you corny bastard.


Always like that you give the most honest feed. Not saying other people are lying but Xray just doesn't give a fuck.

I put the Ice Killa line in because, truthfully, i think he is getting far too much positive attention than his music has earned. You say he's still improving, precicsely; hence, he's not in a position for him to be called a "king" or to be praised like he is. The likes of me and you went through loads of bullshit when we started out. So should he. And if i have to be the only one to say it, i will. I also do truly believe the audio stage is in a fucking terrible state. I'm not egotistic enough to claim my music will "save the audio stage", but certainly my attitude is set to return now that i can actually give people feedback, and that is what i meant by that lyric. Also you're taking the lyrics a bit literally there: i never said Ax left, i said he was in the lab, i.e. working on an album so he didn't really have time to post much music or feed much music.

As for the rest of it, well i'm sorry it wasn't to your taste i suppose. As for the beat that's Ax's perogative.
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I understand what you meant now. I agree I did take it literally that was strange, anyways welcome back mayne. The controversy of the british rapper is back. :shifty:
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Tash8 » May 24th, '09, 02:42

Big Ax-D wrote:ok, nuff said about ax-d's stuff, I was simply trying to help kez, with a beat, hook and mixing... but for tr audience I suck.

so... well... NEW MILLENIUM is the last audio post I make here

apparently, being what u are is not good on here, you have to be what others want you to be, and no,i WILL not do what you want, I will do what I like and produce what I like, so its over

NO MORE BIG AX-D MUSIC ON TRSHADY

bye bye!!!

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you don't help anyone by giving them wack beats, you help someone by giving them good beats... if ur gonna get so emotional about this maybe you SHould stop making music, if anything people telling you that this beat sucked should motivate you into working harder... but i guess ur not that type of person...

whatever....
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby AspirinE » May 24th, '09, 14:37

Shit is aight, the beat is a lil too loud, i could barely hear the verses. I liked the chorus actually, stands out, lyrics are good, just needs to be louader.
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby DOPE » May 24th, '09, 17:24

i like this beat, good beat, intro is sick.

and as for rap, i liked that too, but the vocals werent really clear mixing doesnt seem to be good.

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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby B.A.D. » May 26th, '09, 03:53

Tash8 wrote:you don't help anyone by giving them wack beats, you help someone by giving them good beats... if ur gonna get so emotional about this maybe you SHould stop making music, if anything people telling you that this beat sucked should motivate you into working harder... but i guess ur not that type of person...

whatever....


I know... thats why I apologize for that... stupid things were going thru my mind at that moment
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Tash8 » May 26th, '09, 04:47

Big Ax-D wrote:
Tash8 wrote:you don't help anyone by giving them wack beats, you help someone by giving them good beats... if ur gonna get so emotional about this maybe you SHould stop making music, if anything people telling you that this beat sucked should motivate you into working harder... but i guess ur not that type of person...

whatever....


I know... thats why I apologize for that... stupid things were going thru my mind at that moment


it's aite man, everyone goes thru shit like that every once a while.
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Kez » May 30th, '09, 02:42

Cheers to all who've left feed on the track. :y:
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Mr. Chambers » May 30th, '09, 04:15

ok...............honestly....i stopped halfway through the 2nd verse........

beat was horrible.............just not good @ all................i don't wanan say your accent is terrible...cuz i don't judge rappers on their accents......or voices..........but this wasn't good....=\.............

the lyrics are corny............very....been there done that type shit...........plus some might say this is a good flow....but to me.........with your accent...it felt like you were fighting to stay on beat more then riding it........

thats just my honest opinion...i guess keep dropping and trying to improve..............keep ya head up
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby <Stiiccy> » May 30th, '09, 13:42

chambers wrote:ok...............honestly....i stopped halfway through the 2nd verse........

beat was horrible.............just not good @ all................i don't wanan say your accent is terrible...cuz i don't judge rappers on their accents......or voices..........but this wasn't good....=\.............

the lyrics are corny............very....been there done that type shit...........plus some might say this is a good flow....but to me.........with your accent...it felt like you were fighting to stay on beat more then riding it........

thats just my honest opinion...i guess keep dropping and trying to improve..............keep ya head up

Dude what kind of fucking feed is that...You didn't even give him advice on how to improve, all you fuckin did was hate on him...

Go fuckin die you fuckin faggot...I doubt you have never have even recorded a fuckin song, not that i give a fuck cuzz it would prolly be some homo ass bullshit anyways...

fuck off with that shit man
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Mr. Chambers » May 30th, '09, 16:39

Dude what kind of fucking feed is that...You didn't even give him advice on how to improve, all you fuckin did was hate on him...

Go fuckin die you fuckin faggot...I doubt you have never have even recorded a fuckin song, not that i give a fuck cuzz it would prolly be some homo ass bullshit anyways...

fuck off with that shit man


:flower: .....fine....since i have actually have to say it..........

A)...think more for your lyrics.............there was some corny ass shit in here..........
B)....work on finding a style that fits your accent and doesn't sound liek your fighting the beat...



i have no reason to hate on this guy..........and yes....i've recorded a whole mixtape.....thank you very much =/...........part of feedback/criticism is the listeners opinion on the song...........if i told him this was hot fiya and keep it up....how would he ever improve?.......or he could juts listen to the multiple other saying it since he can't please everyone...........so please step back from the dick..........i never claim to be better then anyone or hate......i give my honest feedback.....and if he or you can't handle it.....i just won't listen to your songs....its no beef from me to him......so i dunno why you got upset..........
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Re: Mr. Kez [NEW]

Postby Kez » May 30th, '09, 16:51

Thanks for the feed.

And Sticcy i appreciate you defending me but he was only feeding. I mean he's right you can't always be positive.

The lyrics are indeed corny, i sort of designed it so. Maybe trying too hard to make this a "comeback song" made it sound like a very corny attempt at that type of song, i dunno. And yes, i did sorta fight to flow on this beat, i'm trying to work on faster delivery but it was definately a struggle to keep up. Slower beats certainly suit me more, but i don't want to get repetitive.

So thanks for checkin the song, appreciated.
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