IRONIC - HOT 16's feat SHAYLA G (FNF-Lupe's group)

by **_Ironic_** » May 20th, '09, 06:30

yeah, this is a track with Shayla G with 1st n 15th..which the group lupe rap's off of, this is a pretty big track for me considering this was done with a hip hop elite's..I appreciate any feed u can give on this, and if you're feeling it please give it a rating...I appreciate the input :y:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mGurhQHZzgA

drops links and I'll return the feed

by **_Ironic_** » May 20th, '09, 19:17

I can't believe I ain't gettin no feed on this...I know ya'll have heard of lupe fiasco..c'mon now...Shayla G raps in the same group...go to the video I posted then look at the related...you'll see Im not bullshittin..can I pleaaaaaase get some feed now??

by **mcZu** » May 20th, '09, 19:32

First of all; probz for hooking up with Shayla G, that said time for tha feed. Your deliviery is cool, flow seemed flawless and the lyrics were not bad. Shayla G ripped that shit up too, ya both dropped a dope 16, but nothing more. I liked it though, keep doing your thing man.

by **_Ironic_** » May 20th, '09, 20:59

thanks bro, appreciate the feed! uppiiiin :y:

by **_Ironic_** » May 22nd, '09, 05:40

uppp

more feed??

by **_Ironic_** » May 23rd, '09, 02:13

upppp...c'mon guys can i get some feed?

by **threeandtwenty** » May 23rd, '09, 04:02

im not qualified to comment on this track because i dont listen to this type of music.club bangers not my thing.

thats said,i think its ok...too played out.but i guess youre aimin for the masses.even so,s'more creativity would be cool...same old nina,mosberg,bing shit.

"imma run fuck the first one that act scary"

..was good,because i aint heard anything like that.see what i mean...you gotta give people listening new adjectives/verbs etc for them to single you out of 50,000 others (assuming this is not just a side thing and you want to get signed).

by **MoBrat** » May 23rd, '09, 07:09

sick shit man congrats on ur success...u had great flow n good lyrics, dope verses from yall i really enjoyed it even tho i dont normally listen to this style....hopefully u can send me a link 2 dl so i can re-play this again while playin xbox n shit.. :y:

by **_Ironic_** » May 24th, '09, 22:46

thanks for the vote and comment Mo...appreciated!

Website · by **Solace** » May 26th, '09, 21:46

For real good job. Dope flow, dope beat and nice lyrics. Shayla G did dope too, I think you outshined her tho. Props on the collab. Good delivery too, but I think you're at the point where you need not worry about it. Good track good track.

by **Kez** » May 26th, '09, 22:09

Not my type of shit.

For what it is though, a decent job.

by **Mr. Chambers** » May 28th, '09, 02:35

ok.....your delivery and flow is pretty fucking flawless.....i'd enjoy this more if you didn't already sound like a dude from a group i support............but that aside.....lyrically...it was ok.....there coulda been a lil more creativity put into this...but i've heard worse......liek i said the delivery had lots of energy in it..........flow was on time......

i'm not feeding shayla if she's already signed.....fuck her she don't need it