New Song "We Raw"

[soperman005]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/606024331dbb5742/

check it out

[Spyder]

that was almost painful

[soperman005]

ok. wanna elaborate?

[Mr. Chambers]

ok...chorus was horrible.........it was very forced?....i guess the word i'm looknig for

1st dude and 3rd dude(i guess).....was ok...nothing great........your flow was a lil shakey @ time...and i'm not a fan of your delivery.......lyrics were alright......overall...i think if you smooth out your flow a lil more you'll be ok.....

2nd dude reminds me of strick from eMC.....he's not bad.......laid back delivery....smooth flow....not bad

beats was ok....wasn't my cup of tea...and the quality coulda been a bit better.......2nd guy had a few pops for his B's....might wanna fix that

[soperman005]

fo sho thanks anyone else care to comment?

[threeandtwenty]

your delivery lacked energy...you sounded kinda bored with the whole thing. and at the end the mic popped too much.i didnt mind your flow on the chorus,but the end didnt make much sense:you faggots is just hahaha,yeah i get it...but sounds immature,like you couldnt find better adjectives.
your flow was o/wise decent and the beat was good.just more energy man.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

hook is pretty stupid to me lol...
but besides than its actually an allright track...
the mic bounce defo didnt work lol...which was another minus...
but flows are fine until the mic bounce...delievery was kool not too aggresive not too bored...okay