SaJJad - Living In The Past [NEW SHIT]

[Xray]

Thanks for the criticism from everyone, really appreciate peoples thoughts. The beat is probably 80 bpm, so me using an agressive delivery is bound to make it seem like I'm off flow, but for the people that got a good understanding and liking for underground shit, they like it more. The original song by GZA on this beat, his delivery was soo laid back, that the moment I heard the track, I was gonna use an agressive delivery. Word to dope, lotta people use non existing words. Blind & Ax-d glad you both liked the mixing, I tried to make it sound as old as the beat, didn't want it to sound too modern because of the concept of the song. @ DQ, yeah that's what I did with this song, I'm just hoping Hip Hop brings its A game back, so me speaking on these matters is just hoping and a matter of opinion. I can see why you didn't like the beat, your more comfortable with modern beats. @ Anon, yeah my neighbours next door were noisy as fuck when I was recording, and my parents were out so I had to wrap it up quick, I don't think I rushed it though, I'm happy with what it is. Most of you are suggesting ways on to make it better, but most of us don't even have the same taste so I don't know about that one. Thanks to everyone for the feed, and word to Jay, we share the same thoughts.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

the beat is great....
i agree on the mixing...sounds kinda unprofessional....even you wanted to give it that underground touch you could it done better....mixing is kinda poor on this
the voice works for the hook but doesnt work for the verses....
lyrics were kool..no complaints..wouldnt say they OMFGZ lyrics...but very decent

[randomghost]

damn bro...deep beat..u produced it??? loved it....deep lyrics....flow is simply great...mixing is ok..delievery is fire didnt like the hook that much classic track though,,,u liked it keep up the good work

[Tornado]

Loving that old skool simplistic beat by muggs on this. Lyrics and concept were good but your naturally agressive delievery does't suit the beat, i think it would've been better to go in more calmer and your flow wasn't on point asit could've been

[Requiem]

sick beat, the intro is pretty neat.
ur flow is really nice on this song. ur lyrics are great, especially the chorus. "stuck in a time graph" ur emotion fits the track nicely on this. verse 1 is pretty good man. no complaints
verse 2 is better than verse 1, because i feel ur spitting a little harder than on verse 1. ur flow is straight incredible on this one. and how u made if fade out on verse 2 was unique in my opinion.

overall 8.5/10, really good track man. its nice to see u making more laid back/emotional type songs

[Xray]

Thanks for everyones input, really appreciate it. I guess the delivery didn't work for most, maybe I'll re-record it with a more laid back delivery and leave the chorus as it is. @ Random, nah man I wish I made that beat, its DJ Muggs beat. I think the vocals need some slight EQ'ing, to make it sound better but I think it sounded fine like this don't know why some didn't like it. Thanks for the feed, keep it coming.

[Drama Setter]

Wow , Bravo bravo , Thx alot Sajjad , It's Awesome Like always man . Sorry for I Was absent These days , I Should Check this Crazy Thread sooner bro , btw I appreciate .

The beat was great and Dope , Thx to Dj Muggs . U Were Completely Match with the song And the rhyme was crazy too , Overall It's perfect , You know What I mean. Keep it up Homie

[Xray]

Props for the feed bro, glad you liked it.

[mcZu]

I liked the track, couldn't spot any major flaws or anything that stood out as being a problem.
So good job on this one man.

[Xray]

Thanks for the feed Zu and C, appreciated.

[Slimm]

Loved it man, first verse gave me the chills.

[_Ironic_]

beat goes hard
your delivery in the beginning was a little off... but improved with time..lyrics were straight on this..

the chorus was done nicely..

second verse comes in and is much better than the beginning..
overall this song could have been a little bit better..but I'm not complaining...still better than ALOT of shit I've heard on here...8.5 outta ten..


yo u left me feed on a track I just dropped, but I want u to feed on this track, you'll be feelin this alot more:
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=62067
^alot more skill and effort was put into this read the description and it'll make sense.

[Xray]

Props for the feed!! Yeah I left feed.