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This is a joke!! ...fuk

Postby Trigger » Dec 8th, '05, 02:26

(intro)
main some ppl take this site way to serious, i think it's a joke that to some it's really this inportant.
if u like it leave a post or summtin, comments will be appreatiated...and leave a vote plzzz

Wow main
u aint no friend
aint lastin till the end
u try to defend
the bond,will bend
this aint a trend
always tryin to spend
moments to pretend
tryin to contend
it must depend
outta all them men
things always tend
to be, to close to the end


not everything has a explanatoin
some things need a lil hesitation
a lil pertisapatoin, 4 this federatoin
things to close to call thick and thin
1 to many sins is where i've bin
lets begin, look bak when
i fell in, all that persipatatoin

clearly it's done
fuk it hasnt even begun
no fun, pass me that gun
im in a stun, nerves numb
flick my thumb, spit out my gum
on that bum, bathin under the sun
i fuked up and tried to become
a lil thing that to few r some
so arrigent and smooth, yet dumb


(outro)

thats it, hope u semi sorta liked it
but seriously ppl taken this site serious, u need to give it a break 4 awhile
it's not ur whole life.......no beef wit ne of ya'll just sayin .......don't take it so seroius that ppl that leave no where near u talk shit and give u probs and have u up all night wounderin wtf u could did


im out!!!
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Yo

Postby Casper_1111 » Dec 15th, '05, 18:12

u Crazy trigger
i shall not fuck wit ros c popper, hear my gun burst louder then the sound of a chopper, whats this homie, i got 2 ounces in my backpack so bounce back before i let my gun go clickity clak, bam bam let the fire go and than run my my gun son cause them road runners rushin at me so bring the flames ~1~
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Postby pawel » Dec 15th, '05, 18:25

don't hate it, don't love it :p it's nice, but the sentences are way too short :worship:
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 15th, '05, 20:24

'dont take this too seriously' but damn that was terrible, no flow and it was a bit random,

"flick my thumb, spit out my gum
on that bum, bathin under the sun " ????

and jus sumin thats ive been wonderin how old are u and faith cos your spellinn is liek a 5 year olds!
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Postby Trigger » Dec 15th, '05, 20:59

lmfao ya it was pretty dumb, but i was bored so i did summtin stupid,and its ight i didnt take it seriously....like some ppl on this site (caugh caugh....andrew) heyy casper is that in a good or bad way? lol
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Postby 555555 » Dec 16th, '05, 04:19

Watch out i'm an elephant and i'm going to eat you. Gargh.
This a shout out to all my homies in Cell block 8. being in jail sucks cause you always have to masterbate. Except when a Jewish person goes to jail all my homies cheer they all make mince meat, out of his Rear. Word
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Postby Trigger » Dec 16th, '05, 04:20

ya ummm or u goin everrrrrwhere sayin that?
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Postby 555555 » Dec 16th, '05, 04:22

beware!!
This a shout out to all my homies in Cell block 8. being in jail sucks cause you always have to masterbate. Except when a Jewish person goes to jail all my homies cheer they all make mince meat, out of his Rear. Word
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Postby Trigger » Dec 16th, '05, 04:24

yo guy, atleast vote yes on my poll
lmfao :D
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Postby shadypelkey » Dec 19th, '05, 23:41

ya ummm still for a joke it's mad shit
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Postby shadypelkey » Dec 19th, '05, 23:43

for the last time leave my name out of your shit rhymes and posts bitch
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Postby Vettori » Dec 20th, '05, 02:53

HAYZI wrote:'

and jus sumin thats ive been wonderin how old are u and faith cos your spellinn is liek a 5 year olds!


What the fuck is that supposed to mean...I spell like all of my shit right
And if you meant him, sorry for the attitude, I'm 17, he's 16....and yea he's real bad with grammer
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Postby HAYZI » Dec 20th, '05, 10:45

Faith99 wrote:
HAYZI wrote:'

and jus sumin thats ive been wonderin how old are u and faith cos your spellinn is liek a 5 year olds!


What the fuck is that supposed to mean...I spell like all of my shit right
And if you meant him, sorry for the attitude, I'm 17, he's 16....and yea he's real bad with grammer



no faith your spellin is fukin terrible but who cares i was jus sayin cos i cudnt stop laughin at "opologiez" and "pertisapatoin" etc :p
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Wow

Postby Vettori » Dec 20th, '05, 15:02

Holy shit, Sure I make the occasional fuckin errors, But you make a huge deal about me spellin stuff bad, Your on the right track to say that shit to tigger, Like shit, I am nothing near him, He doesn't compare to my grammar level LMAO, or compare to me what so ever, If i'm writing stuff on paper I Am very good at spelling shit, when it's on a forum, I'm pretty sure we could substitute like the word "you", to like "yu"
I don't see the big deal, But w/e, Peace
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Re: Wow

Postby HAYZI » Dec 20th, '05, 20:19

Faith99 wrote:Holy shit, Sure I make the occasional fuckin errors, But you make a huge deal about me spellin stuff bad, Your on the right track to say that shit to tigger, Like shit, I am nothing near him, He doesn't compare to my grammar level LMAO, or compare to me what so ever, If i'm writing stuff on paper I Am very good at spelling shit, when it's on a forum, I'm pretty sure we could substitute like the word "you", to like "yu"
I don't see the big deal, But w/e, Peace


omg how am i makin a "huge deal" of anything?? it was a jokey comment to go wit the "dont take this seriously" theme of this topic, and neway i wasnt talkinnn aabout abbreviations i was talkin about your spelling normally and another thing ive noticed now u mentiuon it is that u put capitals on like 3/4 of all your words which is pretty strange :p
but again i aint makin a huge deal of nutinnn, im jus sayin
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