Big Ax-D - Like This (Gravity)

[B.A.D.]

new track for a new mixtape I'm working on called "Almost Midnight"... if anyone wants to send tracks for that mixtape, skits, collabs or whatever let me know .... also TMA2 is on the builds!!!!.. get ready!!!

Title: Like This (Gravity)
Artist: Big Ax-D
Produced by: Big Ax-D
Album: Almost Midnight Mixtape
Link: http://www.zshare.net/audio/61026117996b5a08/

Lyrics:

(Verse 1)
I guess, I represent the rappers
that test the listeners to clap this
I'm blessed, consistent with the masses
the best for those who really like this
my style is strange, but I can prove I'm great
without a change, I can grove the state
of sound, magic, and liberty
deep in me, trauma, my arms bleedin G'
but about me?, I feel like young and old
from hot to cold, I be... like me... re-mold
to re-form, the refrom of rap's re-born
re-store my old skul style, its fun
meanwhile in the other side I come
to your house to produce the music ground
I look to express mine, compress hate
I'm tickin to press time, this fresh plate

(Hook)
Maybe I grind down, went for a step down
but I will rock now, walk up the stage now
(samples)

(Verse 2)
I think when I'm down the stage, I'm nervous
I'm scared to think, words that come out the cirucs
my mind got clowns, elephants, and jugglars
with rainbow colors, thrown and catch the balls
and it gets detatched everytime I'm drunk
things get confused, after I crash I hunk
puke my bedroom, my bathroom too
but I guess swine flu infected you
cuz you behave like pigs, who dig the mud
outta my mind I'm robbed, I'm back like a God
like your father, educating your route
to drink that hip hop soupe, I'm a cook
Mr. Duhart, I'm smart enough for war
you can smell the roses everytime I fart
no rhymes, I need consistency
my philosophy's is an iniciative: "see to be"

(Hook)
Maybe I grind down, went for a step down
but I will rock now, walk up the stage now
(samples)

(Verse 3)
sometimes this times can freeze your mind
aply it to shine, rewind, and re-live your live
I'm kind and unpolite at the same time
wihout a father, I survived to align
to the soldiers who will protect the front line
I need to find out why I'm tryng to climb
the tallest mountaint, but Ax-D's a crime
the eternal fountain of two thousand nine
come on in, enjoy it, don't hate me no more
its nothing at all, I'm starting to fall
I told em before, we started a war
the strategy moves for a mind reading ball
categorical show, of who the "who the best" poll
but I'm still not pal, I don't know you at all
Rise after the fall
you can buy my mutherfucking heart pieces in a mall

(Hook)
Maybe I grind down, went for a step down
but I will rock now, walk up the stage now
(samples)

[Mr. Chambers]

ok.....feedback


for the most part i understood everything..........but your accent is really heavy...not a bad thing tho it adds to your style.........just makes it a lil more difficult for people without your accent to understand....but oh well right... lol....nothing you can really do to change that....and trying to change your accent would be stupid.....

flow was very good....got kind of a bouncy/grimy combo going on....you got a pretty dope voice...pause............its dark......i liek it.......

the only real complaint...and this was the same with half the album of yours that i listened to........your beats all have the same vibe to me......they're all fast paced sounding......fairly bouncy...........now liek i said..i only got through half the album so far....so i might be ignorantly speaking..but please forgive me if i am...........try maybe switching the pace up.....you obv. got a pretty good handle on the fast paced beats......try your hand @ more slower paced beats......something more soulful or something.............it'll also help change your flow up some........

but its not bad...your not a bad producer....and your a very good mc.............just try different styles and shit..cuz thats what music is all about........being able to experiment.........keep dropping and making music

[Steve Spag]

Pretty good stuff man! The flow could be better at some points, but overall I thought it was pretty hot. I was really feelin' the hook, probably a little more than the rest of the track, but it sounds nice. Your voice sounds a lot better in your recent tracks man, I deffinetly see the improvement. Probably one of my favourite's I've heard from you, so keep it up man!

[threeandtwenty]

great beat...totally feeling this vibe.dope track overall,liked the singing style on the hook.only felt the eminem sample on hook was a little slow,sounded bit weird. great track,around 8.5.

[B.A.D.]

wow, thanks to everybody for the positive feedback, greatly appreciated

all the feeds and suggestions are greatyl taken into consideration for further tracks, thanks ppl

[Jay-19]

I'm gonna be honest with you Ax-D, the only thing I liked about this track was the hook. That shit was awesome. But the rest of the track was not my cup of tea. You rush too much at some parts and I got problems understanding some of the lyrics without reading them. You should really work on that man.

My two cents...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

gotta team up with jay there..
sounded really rushed..and do what chambers said..its about time for a new style

[Xray]

Damn this is dope man, loving the flow. Beat is bouncy as fuck, I see you got your old voice on here, sounds dope man for real this voice sounds natural and good. Chorus is dope and so is the verses, really feeling this. The scratches were dope to man. Great shit man keep it up.

[Tornado]

Not very good, i know you like your techno stuff but i feel you should've used a different beat. Verse 1 was clear and dope but througout the song, you rush the beginning of he sentence and your trying to cactch up which makes it A.) hard to understand and B.) ruins your flow and delivery. The scratches were a dope idea but the vocal samples weren't on point

[randomghost]

damn x lovin this track....nice beat...good production nice verses....flow is on point...delivery is awsome...good song xd...i liked it

[DelinQuent]

sorry it took so long to get you some feed.

beat sounds sorta like techno, i'm not a fan.

flow is good, but it has syllable issues just as your album did. like the rhyming tho, good shit/

hook is eh, not a fan

second verse is dope after the swing flu reference, dope verse, flow still needs some refining.

flow on the end of this was AMAZING, loved it. this was the best verse. good shit man.

overall, a decent track, won't listen a second time, but it was still good.

[Kez]

Surprised i haven't left feed on this

Loving the beat, lively stuff
The hook is crazy
Flow is nice, lyrics are great there are some good lines in there, the swine flu thing = lol!
Pronunciation has improved, i could understand most of this. Still needs work obviously but it's hardly unintelligible.

Sick track

[preest]

yo man, I liked it - thought the quality was good!! I did think that the eminem sample sounded a little out of time with the rest of the beat so if you found a sample or scratched your voice saying it, I think it would all fit nice. But good track bro