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NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 3rd, '09, 01:57

This is the first single off "The Life Overdose"...It'll be dropping August 18th, THIS summer. Recorded this a few months back. Pretty personal track, seeing as it's my fondest memories of getting fucked up, haha. As always, any and all feedback is appreciated!

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Steve Spag - Memory Lane.mp3 - 4.00MB

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby Solace » Jun 3rd, '09, 02:01

Gave feed on MSN but here Ill go a bit more in detail. Loving this track. The mixing, I enjoy it very much. The way you flow on this simple dope beat is nice. I can't point anything bad about this track. Lyrics are top notch as you usually pull off. The quality is high too. This track kind of reminds me of 4:20 (w/Kyle Spratt). Can't wait for the album, bro.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby Emadyville » Jun 3rd, '09, 03:48

I saw your bulletin on myspace and just commented on there but for some real feed, this track was nice. Realll laid back, flow was nice, voice fit this well, lyrics were good, rhymes were nice, overall this is a real good track. :y: :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 3rd, '09, 04:08

nice beat choice.

lyrics are funny lmfao. flow messes up in some spots but for the most part it's dope. lyrics are nice, not a fan of the subject tho.

not a fan of the sample.

funny description of the puking lmfao. flow is better on the second verse. lyrics are again good.

third verse isn't working with the extended words, you sound completely emotionless, which makes it boring.

overall, it's a nice track, cool concept, but it's boring. very boring. the flat delivery worked for the first few bars but then it just got boring lol. i'm normally a fan of your shit, i guess this track just isnt my thing.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 3rd, '09, 09:31

Thanks for the feed guys, glad you're diggin' it.

Keep the feedback coming, please!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby Tornado » Jun 3rd, '09, 14:23

Only thing that pisses me off is the chorus, totally annoying. I love the laid back delivery that sounds like your high and reminiscing, something you can totaly bump when u want to chilll. One of my faviourite tracks from tr, well done
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 3rd, '09, 18:36

the beat is great, only thing I have to complain is that the bass is to exagerated and I got a very big boofer so all that I can listen is to the "buuuummmmm" so I couldn't pay attention to the lyrics since that is distracting me a lot, I like the sample on the hook, good idea

but if you can re-edit the beat and cut up a bit of that exagerated bass I can give more inn feedback

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from what I could hear its really good and your vocals are well mixed, but if your gonna make this a first single I higly suggest you change the bass drum to something more simple
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 3rd, '09, 20:30

Big Ax-D wrote:the beat is great, only thing I have to complain is that the bass is to exagerated and I got a very big boofer so all that I can listen is to the "buuuummmmm" so I couldn't pay attention to the lyrics since that is distracting me a lot, I like the sample on the hook, good idea

but if you can re-edit the beat and cut up a bit of that exagerated bass I can give more inn feedback

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from what I could hear its really good and your vocals are well mixed, but if your gonna make this a first single I higly suggest you change the bass drum to something more simple

just change the settings on your speakers to lower the bass, lol.
but thanks, i guess. i can't really edit it anymore than it already is.

@tornado: thanks man, i appreciate the comments. when i first played the song to a friend of mine, he said the same thing about the hook, lol. to be honest, even i don't know what it's saying at some points :unsure: lmao.
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Postby Arabian Shady » Jun 3rd, '09, 20:51

beat is pretty damn good, sumthing laid back to listen to when you wna relax, lyrics are fun to listen to , flow goes nicely with the beat , the diffrent chorus is a nice touch,
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 5th, '09, 14:40

hey, I got on another computer to listen to this

wow... i loved the beat and the sample of the hook

your lyrics are deep and I really feel you on this track, quality wise sounds great, you went on a studio or something???

great track man, excelent choice for a single
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 5th, '09, 19:09

^^
Thanks for the feed guys. Glad you like it Ax, I appreciate the positive feedback dude!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby Xray » Jun 6th, '09, 04:57

Heard this when you first dropped it, flow was on point and decent but I felt it needed to be alil more funky/active. Lyrics were good, delivery was good but the vocals were kinda loud so it made it seem like delivery wasn't good. Your mixing (beside the voluming) is nice, do you mix it yourself? if so great job. Anyways good track, could of been better but I felt it.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby Brandon S » Jun 9th, '09, 07:46

It's dope, i'll give the album a listen no doubt
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 9th, '09, 10:15

^^
Thanks for checkin' the track out dude, much appreciated. You shall like the album.

@Xray: My buddy did the mixing/mastering. His studio is slowly getting better and better each time I go in.

Keep the feed coming pleas!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG SINGLE - MEMORY LANE

Postby SajN » Jun 9th, '09, 10:31

Nice track man!

Lyrics are great, and flow is good. I like your style!

Looking forward to the tape :y:
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