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Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby randomghost » May 26th, '09, 15:11

Finally people, after a year in the making, the 3rd tape is fully done, shoutout to reveryone on the record (C-riz-Big-Axd-Stephanie-Pik Pocket-Khalifa-Rusty T-Spizzy-Delinquent) and everyone on tr, for making this happen, ya know me people..am just a lazy azz when it comes to abums :p....anyways here is the tracklist:

1. No One Can Judge Me
2. Can't Get Enough
3. Watch Ya Step
4. Left Alone
5. Resurrection Ft. The Khalipha & MC Itty
6. Didn't Mean It Ft. Stephanie & The Khalipha
7. Excessive Pain
8. Follow Me
9. Rumors Ft. Rusty T
10. How U Like ME Now
11. Feeling Good
12. Out of Sight
13. Dont Go
14. what Goes Around Comes Around
15. Put It Down Ft. Spizzy & D.Q
16. Without U
17. Excessive Pain Remix
18. Hip Hop Soldier Ft. C-Riz, Big Axd & Call Me Pik

and here is the:

FRONT COVER:


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BACK COVER


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AND HERE IS THE DOWNLOAD LINK:

http://www.zshare.net/download/605034958b993827/

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http://sharebee.com/b29fba4b


ENJOY PEOPLE..HOPE EVERYONE TO LIKE THE ALBUM...AM WORKIN ON AN EP NOW THATS FULLY PRODUCED BY ME.....CHEERS :b:
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » May 26th, '09, 16:29

okay another way of review...overall:
i was a lil dissapointed to be honest...i expected more...cuz the hype was too big i guess
album started bad imo...especially your fast flows are messy as hell..
your pronouncation doesnt work on fast flows....also your rhymes were lil bit simple
could imagine some more creative rhymes/topics...
then comes my fav track...and actually a rare good track on this tape...Didn't Mean It...
has a nice replay value..especially cuz stephanie's voice is amazing...this other dude delievered too
your part was nice again..cuz it was a slower flow...which definitly suits you and your style more
your features outshined you in the most cases....expect on Resurrection...which was off beat from everyone...lol
Out Of Sight has another replay value aswell...was nice track...and very nice lyrics..
lol@ Dont Go...not about the lyrics but i and profaz used that beat too :p we did better :angry: lol
didnt see too much improvement ...dont wanna be harsh...but was kinda similiar to your 2nd tape when you look it like that...
yeah sorry that i didnt feed track by track..feel free to request if its really needed
keep at it and practise :y:
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby Xray » May 27th, '09, 02:03

I'll give this a download and a listen when I get the time.
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby Tornado » May 27th, '09, 15:44

cool will check soon
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby randomghost » May 28th, '09, 10:39

thanx for checkin chris :happy: and other am waitin for ya reply :)
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby AspirinE » May 28th, '09, 17:23

downloading now... ill hit u up with some feed in a few mins
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby AspirinE » May 28th, '09, 19:51

Dont go - Song is average, beat is very nice, but the flow on this needs work. Mixing is good, i like it, the concept is nice, lyrics are decent too. :y:

Excessive Pain - Lyrics are much better on this, although same flow problem, beat is cool .

Feeling good - I dont likethis song, im sorry, its got no flow, the hook makes me cringe, althought the beat is pretty good.

Out of sight - My favourite song here, i love the beat especially (is it urs? id buy it), flow is better on this, u should do more tracks like this. :y:

Put it down - I like the concept, the singing sounds suitable on this, but dont take high notes lol ... spizzys verse = fire, beat is aight, Ur flow is much better on this... Deliquents verse is hot too. Not a track id listen to though.

What goes around comes around -[b] very nice mixing, flow is aight, lyrics is coo, overall the song is enjoyable, one of my favs. Hook = :y:

[b]Cant get enough -
nice beat, good uptempo shit, a little more flow work and this could be a fantastic song.


Follow me - im sorry but this song is brought down by the flow, ur using somekind of rhyme schem from the 70's ...

hip hop soldiers- dope beat, good features, big axs verse sounds really raw :y:, Pik drops a bomb (reminds me of del funky homosapian), your verse is pretty nice too :y:

How U Like Me Now - the flow is terrible on first verse, second is better, the concept is pretty cool, but u spoil it a lil bit with the flow.

Left Alone - good concept, very heartfelt, good mixing, 4/5 for this

No one can judge me - great beat, concept is a lil cheap, flow is a lil better then on some tracks, but still could be better.

Ressurection - good beat, good mixing, song is pretty decent too. Features are awesome too.

Rumors - DOPE, this is wat u should aim for, flow is great at many points. likee

Watch ur step- dont like these kind of tracks, in my opinion this has no lyrical value, and its something u should do wen u got ur studio hi-tek.

Didnt mean it - its a decent song, like it.. well done on this.






Alltogether:

+ Very good mixing job, i would never have the patience to mix it like that, Feature songs are very nice, You have pretty cool concepting for ur tracks, and the lyrics aint bad either. I like some tracks very much.

- (Im not saying this to be picky or anything, just my honest feed,) ur flow needs work,u try to match a sentance to the way ur beat goes wen really u should be suspending ur rhymes or wordplaying to match the ends of a bar to the snare, i can hear u do it well sometimes, so i assume ur just not using ur full potential sometimes. In a rap song wat matters is the flow, fuck the beat, fuck the lyrics, if u can flow, u get listeners cruising down the suburb blocks nodding they head and throwing up gangsigns.

overall: 3/5
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We should do a track together some time.. :b: hit me up
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby B.A.D. » May 28th, '09, 21:13

already downloaded, I'll put it in my car and listen to it a lot so when I finish my exams I can sit down peacfully and leave proper feed :y:
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby randomghost » May 28th, '09, 22:49

AspirinE wrote:Dont go - Song is average, beat is very nice, but the flow on this needs work. Mixing is good, i like it, the concept is nice, lyrics are decent too. :y:

Excessive Pain - Lyrics are much better on this, although same flow problem, beat is cool .

Feeling good - I dont likethis song, im sorry, its got no flow, the hook makes me cringe, althought the beat is pretty good.

Out of sight - My favourite song here, i love the beat especially (is it urs? id buy it), flow is better on this, u should do more tracks like this. :y:

Put it down - I like the concept, the singing sounds suitable on this, but dont take high notes lol ... spizzys verse = fire, beat is aight, Ur flow is much better on this... Deliquents verse is hot too. Not a track id listen to though.

What goes around comes around -[b] very nice mixing, flow is aight, lyrics is coo, overall the song is enjoyable, one of my favs. Hook = :y:

[b]Cant get enough -
nice beat, good uptempo shit, a little more flow work and this could be a fantastic song.


Follow me - im sorry but this song is brought down by the flow, ur using somekind of rhyme schem from the 70's ...

hip hop soldiers- dope beat, good features, big axs verse sounds really raw :y:, Pik drops a bomb (reminds me of del funky homosapian), your verse is pretty nice too :y:

How U Like Me Now - the flow is terrible on first verse, second is better, the concept is pretty cool, but u spoil it a lil bit with the flow.

Left Alone - good concept, very heartfelt, good mixing, 4/5 for this

No one can judge me - great beat, concept is a lil cheap, flow is a lil better then on some tracks, but still could be better.

Ressurection - good beat, good mixing, song is pretty decent too. Features are awesome too.

Rumors - DOPE, this is wat u should aim for, flow is great at many points. likee

Watch ur step- dont like these kind of tracks, in my opinion this has no lyrical value, and its something u should do wen u got ur studio hi-tek.

Didnt mean it - its a decent song, like it.. well done on this.






Alltogether:

+ Very good mixing job, i would never have the patience to mix it like that, Feature songs are very nice, You have pretty cool concepting for ur tracks, and the lyrics aint bad either. I like some tracks very much.

- (Im not saying this to be picky or anything, just my honest feed,) ur flow needs work,u try to match a sentance to the way ur beat goes wen really u should be suspending ur rhymes or wordplaying to match the ends of a bar to the snare, i can hear u do it well sometimes, so i assume ur just not using ur full potential sometimes. In a rap song wat matters is the flow, fuck the beat, fuck the lyrics, if u can flow, u get listeners cruising down the suburb blocks nodding they head and throwing up gangsigns.

overall: 3/5
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We should do a track together some time.. :b: hit me up
thanx for the breakdown bro :worship: :worship: ama work on ma flow :y: thanx alot appreciated :b:

and Big-AXD waitn for ya feed :8) and ama hit ya for a collab sometime :happy: and the outta sight beat is not mine...its produced by 2 deep...the only beat i produced is hip hop soildiers....cheers bro :b:
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby Kez » May 30th, '09, 02:47

Yo Random i'll download this asap

Expect my feed Tuesday earliest (exams finish)
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby DelinQuent » May 30th, '09, 03:48

01-singing isnt that good, not awful tho. beat is DOPE. flow is nice, rhyming has some nice chains. flow falls off in some spots. end of the verse was weak. hook is eh, catchy melody, but it doesnt sound right. first verse was better flow wise. "come on come on" after that was nice. syllable count fucked up the flow something major on the start of the 3rd verse. overall 7/10 a decent track

02-beat is cool, unique. flow is dope on the first verse, rhyming is nice too. hook is nice a catchy but has some wack lines, but i still like it lol. second verse has a dope flow too, love the way you fiddle with your voice. overall 8/10, a good track.

03-this is garbage, beat sucks. not into this at all, flow is decent, rhyming is nice. subject is wack. mixing on the start of the chorus needs to be fixed. but the chorus isn't good, not into it. flow doesnt suit the beat on the second verse, or the first for that matter. overall 4/10, not a good song, defo weak.

04-beat is DOPE, flow comes and goes, don't like the "ang" rhymes, sounds corny. chorus is nice, but hard to understand what you're saying, i still liked it. flow is again eh on this verse, rhyming is decent as well. the delivery on the verses didnt match the concept at all, i was expecting something more personal. overall 6/10 a barely decent track.

05-flow is bad, syllables arent matching at all, didnt match the beat at the start either, end of the verse was much better. chorus is bad, not into it. second guy has a MUCH better flow, his rhyming is also nice but his delivery is lacking. his volume is also too loud lol. WTF is this bitch doing? lmfao she's not even flowing at all, she sucked, really awful. delivery was flat, flow fucking sucked, she really brought this song down, not that it was great without her, but now it's awful with her. overall 4/10, chorus was lackluster, your verse had a weird flow, second verse was the best.

06-this beat is nice. your flow on this is real nice, delivery also matches this beat, good shit. whoa, flow messed up on the word "ordinary". chorus is amazing. second guy's flow isn't as well done as yours, loved the "didn't mean it" interuption. overall 8/10 a great song.

07-you need to work on delivery, this doesnt match the personal feel you're going for. first verse was nice tho. chorus is eh, not into it. delivery on the second verse is better, matches a bit better. sounds like you punched in :n: i hate when people punch in, if you can't spit the verse in one shot, go back a rewrite it. you should only do things within your limits, if you can't spit the bar, go back and rewrite so you can get your breath somewhere. overall 6/10, chorus was lacking. delivery could have been better suited to the concept.

08-hook is nice, i like it. flow is nice, some syllable mashing again, work on that. toward the end of the verse this falls off MAJOR, you're just spitting random words that rhyme, wack. you're doing it again on the second verse but not as badly this time, you kinda sorta make sense lol. overall 6/10 an eh track.

09-don't like the beat. wow, this is corny as fuck lol. flow is nice, but those echo things you did completely ruin this verse, so does the singing. a decent verse is the best i can say. wow, i'm skipping this last guy, he's awful. overall 2/10 definitely the worst song i've ever heard from you.

10-flow is struggling, syllables aren't matching, some lines you're going fast, some slow. end of the verse was awful. hook is decent. wow, this verse is corny, you threw a grenade? lmfao. flow is awful on the 3rd verse, you're just spitting bars at random. overall 4/10, flow is messy, lyrics are garbage.

11-flow is nice, not into the concept. rhyming is decent. hook is nice and catchy, the lyrics are awful tho lol, not my type of song. lyrics are corny, jessica simpson is completely irrelevant in today's music lol. overall 3/10 not my type of song at all.

12-not a fan of beats with this dirty sound. flow is nice tho. good verse. loved the "money, grills" line. hook is weird, don't really like it. not into the second verse, i found myself drifting off, got bored. overall 7/10 decent track.

13-FINALLY, your delivery matches the beat perfectly lol. lyrics are decent. hook is eh, kinda like it, kinda don't. now your delivery is veering from the beat. second verse fell off delivery wise. overall 5/10, if the second verse's delivery matched the beat this score would have been much higher, prolly an 8.

14-me and Emadyville (D.Dubs) have a song to this that's on my album. hook is nice, i like it. delivery is nice on this. rhymes are nice too. good verse. flow is nice on the second verse minus some syllable stuffing. nvm, completely falls off thru the verse lol. sad to see you did nothing with the 3rd verse. overall 5/10, second verse really ruined this song.

15-i'm on this, dope song. hook needs some work tho. that verse from me is like a year old lmfao.

16-LOVE THIS BEAT, ive had it for at least a year and a half lol. why are you yelling these hype ass clubby adlibs on such a down-tempo song? all the woos and yeahs don't match at all. you succeeded in completely ruining this sampled chorus lol. you cut the second verse out very sloppily. overall 4/10 flow wasnt that good, and you destroyed a beautiful sampled hook.

17-i like this version MUCH better than the other one. flow sounds better on this one. hook is also better. a little repetitive though. overall 8/10 i like this track.

18-already fed this, dope ass song.

overall 6/10 a decent album. nothing i'd listen to twice. you need to practice your verses before you record them to find all the flaws in your flow. you have a big problem with syllables, your lines don't seem to match very often which completely ruins your flow. also work on making sure your delivery matches your idea. if it's a personal song, don't give us your club delivery, get what i mean? keep at it Random, i've heard much better from you, i'd say this album was definitely a step down from your usual.
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby B.A.D. » May 30th, '09, 21:36

first thing I gotta say, you should organize the tracks better so people don't struggle when tryn to find them when they load the album to itunes
also, using official beats and soundclick beats bring the goodness of the album a big step down, I suggest for your next album get beats made by you and custom beats from producers you know like Mart85, sajjad, me, tash etc...

ok... breakdown

No One Can Judge Me
excelent choice for the opening track, the beat fits it perfectly, the hook.. hmm.. You can add extra effects to the hook like some flangers or stuff so it can be differed from the verse, your flow is extra good, also I need you to teach me some techinques of your mixing cuz its great, huge improvement on there... the lycis fit the track well, I always love your opening tracks... good start

Can't Get Enough
good choice of beat, the pella volume could be teared down a little bit, so the beat work can be equaly appreciated, the flow is normal, you need to add your style to it, the hook is good for what its meant to, but you coul've made it match the beat in a diferent way, either way, I love the swagg you bring to this track, lol... also my friends loved this one, great track... (let me remix it :y: )

Watch Ya Step
As I noticed on the whole album your gettin into a more Just Blazin southern style, I'm not sure if it fits you, you got more of a New York style with that Arab magic you bring in, either way its a good choice of beat, keeps the listener from skipping the song, the hook is a major problem on this one, seems like the timing of it was mistaken, didn't like it.... the flow is excelent, the start of the verse 2 is great, I love how you played with it, amazing work

Left Alone
:worship: good speech for the intro :worship: ... hmm I've noticed how sinima is losing his touch with the beats, but you managed to work it fine, your lyrics are amazing, structured-wise, damn you got some crazy lyrical wiritng there, also the hook is amazing, you did it great... amazing track to re-listen to, Great great stuff and I can relate a lot to this track man, you did a very good job on here, I think its a bit exagerated but still good effort, very nice track.

Resurrection
this sounds like these days part 2 hahaha, great beat choice for it, your flow is bad, you struggle to many words on a sentence, and its dificult to understand, but the things you say are really good, the hook sounds like these days also, great thing man, and I love this kind of tracks, khalipha, I've hurd better from him, his mixing is weird, but he did good a lot, Mc-Itty, damn she lost the flow, the things she says are really good, really really good, but she needs to conect with the beat, sounds like if she wrote it without listening to the beat... best verse was random ghost's... I enjoyed this track a lot and I will be bumping it too much!!!... I loved it

Didn't Mean It
the mixing sounds different than the other tracks, sounds too low and unmastered, but still the tracks is real good, stephanie know how to do her thang, also excelent verses from you and khalipha, I love this kind of tracks but the swagg of it is not my style, good track man

Excessive pain
I'm pretti sure I alreay left feed on this beat, sounds like a 2 deep beat.... very good track

Follow Me
this sounds like a mix between southern and western... your flow goes really well with the beat, very enjoyable track, so far the album is great, I like the lyrics and the hook, great stuff you did in here, I like the swagg of the beat with your voice, flow is simply excelent,.... but never the less its an excelent track, I can see you put a lot of effort into this one, suits you well

Rummors
Tags :n: .... thats the major bad thing of using soundclick beats, specially sinima, but damnz!!! your flow is great!!... you really uped your flow a fuckiong lot, amazing verse and hook.... damnz Rusty T is really bad hahaha, where's he from?? Jamaica??? lol.... damnz, I didn't liked his flow at all... well, on the topic of the track hahah, random you did it excelent, I loved listenin to this track, made me laugh a couple times... you got great stuff... but that rusty t dude is weird.. lol

How U Like Me Now
story telling :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: ... wow... this track is amazing!!!
everything is good, verses, hook.... I will listen to this track a million times, I loved the story!!!!
also you managed to put great lyics without fucking the song up.... :worship:

Feeling Good
already left feed.... great track!!

Out Of Sight
has 2 deep written all over it, but I recomend not dealing with that dude, turns out to be a bitch ass when you really meet him... but well, he has talent to sample.... your hook is what I liked most of this track, you don't struggle at all with it, amazingly done... the verses are great, the flow is real real good on this too.... the mixing is perfect man, how u do that?????.... Great chilly track man, I am definitively enjoying the album man

Don't Go
vocals are too loud.
beautifull track bro, I want to dedicate this one to a girl man, ama show it to her hahaha... great track bro.... this is excelent, plus all the mixings, flows etc.. are great... damn man, the hook is amazing :worship: :worship: ... damnz man, lovely

What Goes Around Comes Around
sorry man, I can't feed tracks in which I used the same beat... It will not be ethic

Put It Down
wow, this track is old as fuck!!!... I think you first posted it on tr around january hahaha, or something like that damnz!!... hot track, already fed it

Without U
all the last tracks of the album are turning out kinda the same, either way its a great track, but hmm mixing is strange, but thank God you got great pronunciation so its easy to follow... damn the hook is trash, you should not rap above a singed sample cuz it sounds really strange and its impossible to listen to what you are saying also, why u did only one verse?... hmm... didn't like this track

Excesive Pain Remix
again, can't feed tracks that I used the beat before to avoid misunderstandings n stuff

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Overall: great work, your best album to date, you need more Ax-D on it tho' :wave:
my favourite track by far is: "Left Alone"... that track is a masterpiece

teach me how to mix :y:
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Re: Random Ghost - No One Can Judge Me Lp ( Download Now)!!!!

Postby randomghost » May 31st, '09, 13:17

Kez wrote:Yo Random i'll download this asap

Expect my feed Tuesday earliest (exams finish)
aigh kez...i'll be waitin :8)


DelinQuent wrote:01-singing isnt that good, not awful tho. beat is DOPE. flow is nice, rhyming has some nice chains. flow falls off in some spots. end of the verse was weak. hook is eh, catchy melody, but it doesnt sound right. first verse was better flow wise. "come on come on" after that was nice. syllable count fucked up the flow something major on the start of the 3rd verse. overall 7/10 a decent track

02-beat is cool, unique. flow is dope on the first verse, rhyming is nice too. hook is nice a catchy but has some wack lines, but i still like it lol. second verse has a dope flow too, love the way you fiddle with your voice. overall 8/10, a good track.

03-this is garbage, beat sucks. not into this at all, flow is decent, rhyming is nice. subject is wack. mixing on the start of the chorus needs to be fixed. but the chorus isn't good, not into it. flow doesnt suit the beat on the second verse, or the first for that matter. overall 4/10, not a good song, defo weak.

04-beat is DOPE, flow comes and goes, don't like the "ang" rhymes, sounds corny. chorus is nice, but hard to understand what you're saying, i still liked it. flow is again eh on this verse, rhyming is decent as well. the delivery on the verses didnt match the concept at all, i was expecting something more personal. overall 6/10 a barely decent track.

05-flow is bad, syllables arent matching at all, didnt match the beat at the start either, end of the verse was much better. chorus is bad, not into it. second guy has a MUCH better flow, his rhyming is also nice but his delivery is lacking. his volume is also too loud lol. WTF is this bitch doing? lmfao she's not even flowing at all, she sucked, really awful. delivery was flat, flow fucking sucked, she really brought this song down, not that it was great without her, but now it's awful with her. overall 4/10, chorus was lackluster, your verse had a weird flow, second verse was the best.

06-this beat is nice. your flow on this is real nice, delivery also matches this beat, good shit. whoa, flow messed up on the word "ordinary". chorus is amazing. second guy's flow isn't as well done as yours, loved the "didn't mean it" interuption. overall 8/10 a great song.

07-you need to work on delivery, this doesnt match the personal feel you're going for. first verse was nice tho. chorus is eh, not into it. delivery on the second verse is better, matches a bit better. sounds like you punched in :n: i hate when people punch in, if you can't spit the verse in one shot, go back a rewrite it. you should only do things within your limits, if you can't spit the bar, go back and rewrite so you can get your breath somewhere. overall 6/10, chorus was lacking. delivery could have been better suited to the concept.

08-hook is nice, i like it. flow is nice, some syllable mashing again, work on that. toward the end of the verse this falls off MAJOR, you're just spitting random words that rhyme, wack. you're doing it again on the second verse but not as badly this time, you kinda sorta make sense lol. overall 6/10 an eh track.

09-don't like the beat. wow, this is corny as fuck lol. flow is nice, but those echo things you did completely ruin this verse, so does the singing. a decent verse is the best i can say. wow, i'm skipping this last guy, he's awful. overall 2/10 definitely the worst song i've ever heard from you.

10-flow is struggling, syllables aren't matching, some lines you're going fast, some slow. end of the verse was awful. hook is decent. wow, this verse is corny, you threw a grenade? lmfao. flow is awful on the 3rd verse, you're just spitting bars at random. overall 4/10, flow is messy, lyrics are garbage.

11-flow is nice, not into the concept. rhyming is decent. hook is nice and catchy, the lyrics are awful tho lol, not my type of song. lyrics are corny, jessica simpson is completely irrelevant in today's music lol. overall 3/10 not my type of song at all.

12-not a fan of beats with this dirty sound. flow is nice tho. good verse. loved the "money, grills" line. hook is weird, don't really like it. not into the second verse, i found myself drifting off, got bored. overall 7/10 decent track.

13-FINALLY, your delivery matches the beat perfectly lol. lyrics are decent. hook is eh, kinda like it, kinda don't. now your delivery is veering from the beat. second verse fell off delivery wise. overall 5/10, if the second verse's delivery matched the beat this score would have been much higher, prolly an 8.

14-me and Emadyville (D.Dubs) have a song to this that's on my album. hook is nice, i like it. delivery is nice on this. rhymes are nice too. good verse. flow is nice on the second verse minus some syllable stuffing. nvm, completely falls off thru the verse lol. sad to see you did nothing with the 3rd verse. overall 5/10, second verse really ruined this song.

15-i'm on this, dope song. hook needs some work tho. that verse from me is like a year old lmfao.

16-LOVE THIS BEAT, ive had it for at least a year and a half lol. why are you yelling these hype ass clubby adlibs on such a down-tempo song? all the woos and yeahs don't match at all. you succeeded in completely ruining this sampled chorus lol. you cut the second verse out very sloppily. overall 4/10 flow wasnt that good, and you destroyed a beautiful sampled hook.

17-i like this version MUCH better than the other one. flow sounds better on this one. hook is also better. a little repetitive though. overall 8/10 i like this track.

18-already fed this, dope ass song.

overall 6/10 a decent album. nothing i'd listen to twice. you need to practice your verses before you record them to find all the flaws in your flow. you have a big problem with syllables, your lines don't seem to match very often which completely ruins your flow. also work on making sure your delivery matches your idea. if it's a personal song, don't give us your club delivery, get what i mean? keep at it Random, i've heard much better from you, i'd say this album was definitely a step down from your usual.
wow thanx for ur honest feed man.. :worship: appreciated..i hope ya like the next album :b:

Big Ax-D wrote:first thing I gotta say, you should organize the tracks better so people don't struggle when tryn to find them when they load the album to itunes
also, using official beats and soundclick beats bring the goodness of the album a big step down, I suggest for your next album get beats made by you and custom beats from producers you know like Mart85, sajjad, me, tash etc...

ok... breakdown

No One Can Judge Me
excelent choice for the opening track, the beat fits it perfectly, the hook.. hmm.. You can add extra effects to the hook like some flangers or stuff so it can be differed from the verse, your flow is extra good, also I need you to teach me some techinques of your mixing cuz its great, huge improvement on there... the lycis fit the track well, I always love your opening tracks... good start

Can't Get Enough
good choice of beat, the pella volume could be teared down a little bit, so the beat work can be equaly appreciated, the flow is normal, you need to add your style to it, the hook is good for what its meant to, but you coul've made it match the beat in a diferent way, either way, I love the swagg you bring to this track, lol... also my friends loved this one, great track... (let me remix it :y: )

Watch Ya Step
As I noticed on the whole album your gettin into a more Just Blazin southern style, I'm not sure if it fits you, you got more of a New York style with that Arab magic you bring in, either way its a good choice of beat, keeps the listener from skipping the song, the hook is a major problem on this one, seems like the timing of it was mistaken, didn't like it.... the flow is excelent, the start of the verse 2 is great, I love how you played with it, amazing work

Left Alone
:worship: good speech for the intro :worship: ... hmm I've noticed how sinima is losing his touch with the beats, but you managed to work it fine, your lyrics are amazing, structured-wise, damn you got some crazy lyrical wiritng there, also the hook is amazing, you did it great... amazing track to re-listen to, Great great stuff and I can relate a lot to this track man, you did a very good job on here, I think its a bit exagerated but still good effort, very nice track.

Resurrection
this sounds like these days part 2 hahaha, great beat choice for it, your flow is bad, you struggle to many words on a sentence, and its dificult to understand, but the things you say are really good, the hook sounds like these days also, great thing man, and I love this kind of tracks, khalipha, I've hurd better from him, his mixing is weird, but he did good a lot, Mc-Itty, damn she lost the flow, the things she says are really good, really really good, but she needs to conect with the beat, sounds like if she wrote it without listening to the beat... best verse was random ghost's... I enjoyed this track a lot and I will be bumping it too much!!!... I loved it

Didn't Mean It
the mixing sounds different than the other tracks, sounds too low and unmastered, but still the tracks is real good, stephanie know how to do her thang, also excelent verses from you and khalipha, I love this kind of tracks but the swagg of it is not my style, good track man

Excessive pain
I'm pretti sure I alreay left feed on this beat, sounds like a 2 deep beat.... very good track

Follow Me
this sounds like a mix between southern and western... your flow goes really well with the beat, very enjoyable track, so far the album is great, I like the lyrics and the hook, great stuff you did in here, I like the swagg of the beat with your voice, flow is simply excelent,.... but never the less its an excelent track, I can see you put a lot of effort into this one, suits you well

Rummors
Tags :n: .... thats the major bad thing of using soundclick beats, specially sinima, but damnz!!! your flow is great!!... you really uped your flow a fuckiong lot, amazing verse and hook.... damnz Rusty T is really bad hahaha, where's he from?? Jamaica??? lol.... damnz, I didn't liked his flow at all... well, on the topic of the track hahah, random you did it excelent, I loved listenin to this track, made me laugh a couple times... you got great stuff... but that rusty t dude is weird.. lol

How U Like Me Now
story telling :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: ... wow... this track is amazing!!!
everything is good, verses, hook.... I will listen to this track a million times, I loved the story!!!!
also you managed to put great lyics without fucking the song up.... :worship:

Feeling Good
already left feed.... great track!!

Out Of Sight
has 2 deep written all over it, but I recomend not dealing with that dude, turns out to be a bitch ass when you really meet him... but well, he has talent to sample.... your hook is what I liked most of this track, you don't struggle at all with it, amazingly done... the verses are great, the flow is real real good on this too.... the mixing is perfect man, how u do that?????.... Great chilly track man, I am definitively enjoying the album man

Don't Go
vocals are too loud.
beautifull track bro, I want to dedicate this one to a girl man, ama show it to her hahaha... great track bro.... this is excelent, plus all the mixings, flows etc.. are great... damn man, the hook is amazing :worship: :worship: ... damnz man, lovely

What Goes Around Comes Around
sorry man, I can't feed tracks in which I used the same beat... It will not be ethic

Put It Down
wow, this track is old as fuck!!!... I think you first posted it on tr around january hahaha, or something like that damnz!!... hot track, already fed it

Without U
all the last tracks of the album are turning out kinda the same, either way its a great track, but hmm mixing is strange, but thank God you got great pronunciation so its easy to follow... damn the hook is trash, you should not rap above a singed sample cuz it sounds really strange and its impossible to listen to what you are saying also, why u did only one verse?... hmm... didn't like this track

Excesive Pain Remix
again, can't feed tracks that I used the beat before to avoid misunderstandings n stuff

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Overall: great work, your best album to date, you need more Ax-D on it tho' :wave:
my favourite track by far is: "Left Alone"... that track is a masterpiece

teach me how to mix :y:
WOOW thanx alot X :worship: :worship: refarding ma mixing..i use mixcraft...its the best mixing program out there...easy and simple to use...download it..and get at me :happy: cheer bro.,thanx for ya feed :worship: :b:
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Chet Starr wrote:how did I miss this :o

downloading...it might take a while for feed, but it will happen :y:
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