[SSquared] Back Home

[die2nite]

I made this song with my friend, he sang on it. We're going with some new styles/ideas here, giving the beat, the emcee, and the singer, equal and adequate appreciation.

Let me know what you think, it's a short track, only two and a half minutes.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/613016635834d7ce/

Drugs, alcohol, women, these don’t control me
There’s no holding me back from zoning out on the track
Mama told me in fact don’t ever get addicted
A sickness, and once you go you ain’t supposed to come back
But what’s a lonely cat supposed to do with his life
When he’s got a pen in one hand, and in the other a mic
He grabs his gamble, he’s a lover of dice
With a flick of the wrist the pen writes out his strife

I don't know where you've gone or where you'll be going
But what I know is you can't control me
Your desire is much too unknowing
Just come back home, I'm feeling lonely
I need you here, please come and show me
But what I know is I'm so-so lonely
My desire is much too foreboding
Just come back home, I need you to know me

I wake up every morning with my head down
I head down-town to the same old game
Same old same, where no one bothers to say my name
I’m fed up and sick of this game I’m playing
Get back home, nosedive straight to the bed
Headphones on till I hear the bass in my head
And when I get tired, down and depressed
I put on another beat, till it pounds down my chest

I don't know where you've gone or where you'll be going
But what I know is you can't control me
Your desire is much too unknowing
Just come back home, I'm feeling lonely
I need you here, please come and show me
But what I know is I'm so-so lonely
My desire is much too foreboding
Just come back home, I need you to know me

[Vettori]

I liked it, lyrics were Sick on first verse. i read lyrics before i playe d the song, and i spit it sick as fuck a nice complex flow that sounds great, So lyrically you did Very well, When i listened to it, The quality didn't stand out great but. You held it I can see improvement, Give you 2 more years of practice , and recording. And i Think You could make an impression, Whoever sang was good also.
i read the lyrics to the chorus first and they were Understanding so.. Keep at this shit, Lookin to hear some better work and quality

[Ka0t1c]

not too bad, i enjoyed it, i will be definitely checkin out ur music in the future

[die2nite]

Thanks for the feed guys. That was actually the first song we recorded together. My friend just got a sick pro setup so we'll be messing around and using that from now on.

[Solace]

I really liked it man, that hook was great and the verses were mint. Keep up the nice stuff man as I said before. Something about your voice reminds me of McMaybe btw lol. Waiting on more tracks from you

[die2nite]

Thanks for the feed broskis

[Drama Setter]

That's a great Drop boi , I like the Story behind.

I don't know where you've gone or where you'll be going
But what I know is you can't control me
Your desire is much too unknowing
Just come back home, I'm feeling lonely
I need you here, please come and show me
But what I know is I'm so-so lonely
My desire is much too foreboding
Just come back home, I need you to know me

cool Chorus