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Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

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Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Vettori » Jun 11th, '09, 22:38

I was sick, But when the oppertunity rose I couldn't say no.
Im satisfied with how it turned out, But it lacked serious expression.
Lemme know what you think.

http://www.Myspace.com/VettoriMusic

Can Be Downloaded @ http://www.zshare.net/audio/616023148d06cad9/
Last edited by Vettori on Jun 19th, '09, 22:34, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby James R. » Jun 12th, '09, 00:20

Well I like the beat but that swooshing sound was kind of annoying.

The verses were all consistent lyrically, with flow, and with delivery. The hook was tight though. I thought it was pretty catchy and you delivered it nice on the beat.

Overall good track man. Especially for being sick.
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Ka0t1c » Jun 12th, '09, 00:27

i think it was done well, it seemed to have a deeper meaning within it, i liked it over all, nothing made me want to hate it
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 12th, '09, 00:34

Bastard, I got a deep song on this beat on The Life Overdose, lol.
Nice song, though.
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Vettori » Jun 12th, '09, 00:58

Thanks everyone. Ye been a while since i recorded and I got sick, but i enjoyed makin it :D
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Emadyville » Jun 12th, '09, 03:51

Damn this was a dope track :y:

Lyrics were tight, rhymes were nice, flow/delivery were great, hook was solid :y:

Great job :y:
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Boston » Jun 12th, '09, 13:10

yoo hit me up on msn for in depth feed, but your probably one of the only dudes myspace i bump to this day ha. i always loved your flow, delivery isnt as bad as you made it to be. but im still down for that collab ! fuckin hit me up. glad u feeling better my dude
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Vettori » Jun 12th, '09, 21:46

Thanks man I appreciate that comment. And thanks for The Feedback.

Ill try comment on other peoples songs soon, when i get my comp runnin,
But In the mean time i can only Hang out Breifly Lol :b: :b: to Everyone
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Tash8 » Jun 12th, '09, 22:14

nice comeback song bro! damn i've missed your music, you rockin it well again, you're whispering a little so fix that and you're good.
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby B.A.D. » Jun 13th, '09, 22:34

sounds pro

I liked the hook the best, its good

overall excelent track, didn't liked the beat, you need to choose more complex beats

the flow is good but its too common... u need to find one on your own style, cuz sounds like someone of the everyone elses, if you feel me

either way, good track, you made great lyrics on it, but not my fav.
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Solace » Jun 13th, '09, 22:44

Great track V, really good. Enjoyed every verse+ the hook. Any download link?
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby threeandtwenty » Jun 14th, '09, 08:34

dope song.your flows very smooth,i usually like fast rap an good lyrics and the song has both.second verse was the best...dont get the name,is it optimistic or pessimistic one sided?
whose arm is this?..i must've cut it off at the pharmacist
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby die2nite » Jun 14th, '09, 09:55

Great song. Clarity/mixing is great, the quality is top notch, could hear every word pretty much. Loving the multies and lyrics, this is actually a song I would download and listen to on my own. I also wrote to this beat so I'm partial to digging it, nice selection.

Looking forward to hearing more
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Mc Cubz » Jun 15th, '09, 01:24

this song is next level - massive talent!
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Re: Vettori- One Sided (New Song)

Postby Mc Cubz » Jun 15th, '09, 01:25

Mc Cubz wrote:this song is next level - massive talent!


I posted your page as a link on my facebook - people need to hear that shit!
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