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NEW!! Random Ghost - Come Back

Postby randomghost » Jun 24th, '09, 15:28

just a song that i recorded recently

http://www.zshare.net/audio/618007611e035495/

or


http://sharebee.com/bc9b3332


feed is appreciated...enjoy :happy:
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Re: NEW!! Random Ghost - Come Back

Postby Kez » Jun 24th, '09, 17:25

Beat suits the song well, sounds good.
Flow is good, the lyrics are good but they're a bit simple and straightforward, could use more metaphors and shit.
The chorus was nice for the most part. You got a good singing voice.

Good little track :y:
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Re: NEW!! Random Ghost - Come Back

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jun 24th, '09, 17:29

great that you took the feedback and used a slower beat..
defo suits you better as kez said...
singin was average..nuttin that blew me away...
flow was slick on the 1st verse.... :y: :y: :y:
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Re: NEW!! Random Ghost - Come Back

Postby IceAxe » Jun 24th, '09, 17:55

singing was nice - nothing spectacular to me but good :y:
Good beat choice, really suits the subject matter.
Flow is good, lyrics are nice, but like kez said, could've used more metaphors/similes

Overall, good work... definitely enjoyable to me
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Re: NEW!! Random Ghost - Come Back

Postby randomghost » Jun 25th, '09, 13:43

Kez wrote:Beat suits the song well, sounds good.
Flow is good, the lyrics are good but they're a bit simple and straightforward, could use more metaphors and shit.
The chorus was nice for the most part. You got a good singing voice.

Good little track :y:
thanx alot kez...feed's appreciated :flower: :y:


°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:great that you took the feedback and used a slower beat..
defo suits you better as kez said...
singin was average..nuttin that blew me away...
flow was slick on the 1st verse.... :y: :y: :y:
thanx bro...appreciated :y: :flower:


IceAxe wrote:singing was nice - nothing spectacular to me but good :y:
Good beat choice, really suits the subject matter.
Flow is good, lyrics are nice, but like kez said, could've used more metaphors/similes

Overall, good work... definitely enjoyable to me
thanx mayne..much much appreciated :flower: :y:
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Re: NEW!! Random Ghost - Come Back

Postby randomghost » Jun 28th, '09, 17:48

bump
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