Further Evidence - GT RONIC - I don't like U

[_Ironic_]

I made this track for all of you who don't like me. I don't like you either. Matter fact I HATE you.

@me

http://www.zshare.net/audio/61863982e127b910/


edit:lyrics cuz requested a few times.

1st verse)
Wanna battle? bring a big 40
wanna war? better grip toasters
I get over like a pinched dober
who you know can jump a fence
curve it?, and turn a hater into a dick holder
go to war, why is that? cuz they plottin to shoot me
threesome, menage, hop in the jacuzzi
last time you saw three, you was watchin the movie
It's almost like I can't behave
The old folks tell me that I gotta get saved
I tell em pray for me cuz I gotta get paid
the block keep sayin that I'm gonna get sprayed
if I keep runnin in a ***** crib with the gauge
FUCK EM, imma RIDE till I'm on the frontpage
Pump it in the jaw if he want it till the grave
Stick a ***** up, take his cash
whoop his ass, brake real fast

2nd verse)

"I got 3 enemies, matter fact make it 4.
but it really don't matter cuz they all get annoying
till they open the door of a black explorer and I
unleash the beast on all you whores,
300 shells go ping on the floor
I got a jet black gun and im ready to ride
loaded to the teeth, so if u want it; "ready to die"?
set it up, Fuck Em all, that's what PAC said.
I don't think you wanna see me when I cock lead
got bread, I ain't worried about a thing,
imma let my nuts hang, if he want it in the brain
all he gotta do is look the wrong way at the chain, James!"

[James R.]

Well this is one of my favorite beats, so I hope you do smtn sick on it or I'll be pissed.

The I DONT LIKE YOU parts are cool, but the little background co-signing voice is annoying.

This song is about 1000 times better than the other one. Good production, good delivery, flow was on point though not as smooth to the beat throughout the whole song like some of your other tracks. Still good though.

Oh and I don't like yo azz neither mufukka! lmfao

[Almostlity]

I like your rapping voice man! (no homo) but you should post lyrics too.
Your delivery was good and your flow was on point as James said.
good looking man

[_Ironic_]

put up lyrics with ur audio ..

that's what rewind is for


1st verse)
Wanna battle? bring a big 40
wanna war? better grip toasters
I get over like a pinched dober
who you know can jump a fence
curve it?, and turn a hater into a dick holder
go to war, why is that? cuz they plottin to shoot me
threesome, menage, hop in the jacuzzi
last time you saw three, you was watchin the movie
It's almost like I can't behave
The old folks tell me that I gotta get saved
I tell em pray for me cuz I gotta get paid
the block keep sayin that I'm gonna get sprayed
if I keep runnin in a nigga crib with the gauge
FUCK EM, imma RIDE till I'm on the frontpage
Pump it in the jaw if he want it till the grave
Stick a nigga up, take his cash
whoop his ass, brake real fast

2nd verse)

"I got 3 enemies, matter fact make it 4.
but it really don't matter cuz they all get annoying
till they open the door of a black explorer and I
unleash the beast on all you whores,
300 shells go ping on the floor
I got a jet black gun and im ready to ride
loaded to the teeth, so if u want it; "ready to die"?
set it up, Fuck Em all, that's what PAC said.
I don't think you wanna see me when I cock lead
got bread, I ain't worried about a thing,
imma let my nuts hang, if he want it in the brain
all he gotta do is look the wrong way at the chain, James!"

[MC Anonymous]

Actually, now that I noticed the James diss, fuck you.

[James R.]

So apparently I missed the "james!" when I was listening to the song... what's that all about pimpin?

[JMG]

i liked it but ur still tryin to sounds like jay

[_Ironic_]

So apparently I missed the "james!" when I was listening to the song... what's that all about pimpin?

my name is james homey.

[James R.]

So apparently I missed the "james!" when I was listening to the song... what's that all about pimpin?

my name is james homey.

ROFL aight. Just had to make sure ya dig?

[_Ironic_]

Actually, now that I noticed the James diss, fuck you.

*whipes salt off your shoulder*


"....matter fact make it 4"

[_Ironic_]

Good flow, generic chorus, nice delivery, lyrics weren't that good, nothing super special, the gun shit is just stupid, 6/10?

keep it up man

made in a day... 13 hours actually...some sleeping occured between then too..

[classthe_king]

ayy man that was really good. Like other people have said your voice sounds really good on the track and your flow is great too.

[_Ironic_]

ayy man that was really good. Like other people have said your voice sounds really good on the track and your flow is great too.

appreciate the props bro,

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

pretty simple track to me
nuttin really SICK....but a piece of good work
flow was nice....beginning of the 3rd verse is the best part
didnt feel the hook...didnt really catch my attention..as it was very simple
so yeah...good work but i could see a better track with more effort (no hate)
but wasnt a complete failure so you good

[Kez]

Beat's crazy
I like the flow
Lyrics got some good rhymes, but i think e-beef is retarded in general, but yeah.
Delivery is sick for the song.
Quality sounds fine.
Hook is alright it's good but i prefer your verses.