"Sinful"

[Mr. Chambers]

this was cool....not as good as your other joint tho.........your flow was ok......honestly.....i don't liek when people do the lines liek you did a couple times like

XXXXXXXXrhyme A//
rhyme A........rhyme B//
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXrhyme B//

but that might be just my opinion..............delivery was nice....lyrics were pretty solid too........overall....tho its good.........

[gutawafang]

the chorus is good. LOL. But i know that's not the main point of the song.

The flow is good. Pronnounciation could be better. Multis used is quite good. And your nameplay too.

I'd just give it a 6.8/10 rating.

This is the best line: a house with no walls but the roof is standing

[Drama Setter]

Not bad bro , really not bad .

the chorus is OK.
but you have turn your voice up and down sometimes , you just sing it in one way and your flow was a little boring , but the rhyme was good .

thx for sharing .

[IceAxe]

Flow is alright, rhymes are good, but the rhyme structure itself kind of threw me off sometimes. The volume on the filtered 'impossible' is way to low, would've missed it if I wasn't reading the lyrics.

7/10

[AspirinE]

I liked it... I remember ur old stuff, this is tons better, decent flow, good concept, beat is cool, didnt really feel the chorus though, but i like the idea. Also needs more low pitch to the sound mastering.

[Drama Setter]

@ Drama. I'm not sure quite what you mean by the voice thing, sorry dude.. Could you explain maybe?
Thanks again, if I can feed anything of your guys' I will ASAP.

Sure , I mean You have A steady Voice and I like it , but you know it's a little monotonic Which makes the listener feel kinda boring after a while , But it's cool and not a big problem , You should turn you voice volume up and down sometimes in your song and add some differnet effect to your voice (not auto tune at all) I mean natural effect for being kinda unique ,that shows your emotion about that verse or line ,dude . you got me ?