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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Solace » Jul 14th, '09, 19:45

I damn enjoyed Emotionless too^

But this song is dope dope man. Glad to see another upcoming rapper man, I might check out ya mixtape if I ain't a fucking lazy bastard haha, but yeah this is a nice track. You got the delivery on track along with the lyrics and flow. Man keep it up!

You'll be seeing ya tracks on Trshadymusic if I ever get off my ass and update it :)
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jul 14th, '09, 20:09

trshadymusic?....please excuse my stupid question...but what is that? :unsure: ...i mean obviously its some sort of music thing...but like....where is it?


Edit: nvm...i see it in your sig :whistle:
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Solace » Jul 15th, '09, 18:32

Yeah...Supposed to help promote underground artists :y:
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 16th, '09, 08:45

It's good ...Your delivery needs more of an edge..Tbh you sound like some off the wall white MC...But if you had more edge to your delivery you would stand out...

Your lyrics are there, and your flow is okayish i guess...

okay verse but work on that delivery
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jul 16th, '09, 16:43

^good looks on the feedback
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jul 16th, '09, 18:44

^good looks on listening...i appreciate it :worship:
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jul 16th, '09, 18:52

^handled.....they ain't 100%.....cuz i write and sometimes add too many syllables or not enough so i have to add while on the fly lol
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Re: Insert Title Here (DOA Verse)

Postby Solace » Jul 26th, '09, 16:29

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