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Weird question..

Postby JPearson » Jul 22nd, '09, 16:48

writing a song n i'm still bein all love clicheish n i was wandering how shit/good of a meant-to-be-romatic line it would to say kisses are like protein shakes n they help me grow strong

to me it sounds sooo rookie both in writing terms n in being romantic terms, n i won't use this line don't worry but was just wandering what u lot thought...
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Re: Weird question..

Postby Solace » Jul 22nd, '09, 17:29

Its cheesy.
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Re: Weird question..

Postby JPearson » Jul 22nd, '09, 17:46

lol i know its shit aint it, only reason i asked was that it would've fit well in the song, please dont fink id ever use it tho
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