C-Riz - Verbal Serial Killer *check it*

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yep im droppin a track....and prolly excuse for the delay (even there's no release date yet lol)
but my tape could need a lil more time then i thought....since i had some issues goin on,then im on vacation and couple features...bla bla
enough talking
here's the track

C-Riz-Verbal Serial Killer
http://www.zshare.net/audio/630554620bfd8011/

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enjoy any feed is appreciated

[Emadyville]

I liked it

Your delivery I felt was really strong, flow was pretty good, lyrics I liked

The only thing I don't think worked was the hook, the lyrics were good, seemed like you shoulda had a slower flow on that I think it was way to fast and didnt sound right because of it, and the last part of the hook is all jumbled, maybe it was just me but I had no idea what you were saying.

So other then the hook I think this was a pretty good track good work

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx man...'ppreciate it
and yeah true...guess i kinda fucked up the mixing on the hook...will try to fix it..thanks for pointin it out

[_Ironic_]

YES C-RIZ!

you continue to elevate...getting better and better...YOUR ADLIBS were nice...well done...and they weren't distracting...your accent throws it off a lil bit, but you can't help it so .

beat is nasty...flow is above average and lyrics are funny "jizz on the cross" haha and I like the switch up on delivery in the second verse

keep it up man and check out my new track...I'm having it an open collab..if I like what people are spitting on it I might use it for my next mixtape...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thanks homie
and yeah always lookin forward to work with other people...so just holla at me

[_Ironic_]

its posted up..like I said if u feel like u can fucks with it then by all means hop on, send me a finished mix and I might use it.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

umm thanks for so much feed??
bump?

[Xray]

Damn this shit is off the chain, your best track to date.

Flow is infuckingsane, lyrics are fucking CRAZY, seriously one of the best written tracks I've heard on here. Street shit at its FINEST. I just fucking love it, mixing was incredible, it was nearly perfect, I'm saying that because some overlays were out of place, still need to work on the timing for that. But damn bro flawless fucking song man for real, I'ma go ahead and say best track in a LONG time to hit TR. And that beat DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN, just crazy. My bad forgot to tell ya what I think of the verses. Verse 1 = CRAZY. Verse 2 = CRAZY. Verse 3 = CRAZY. Lyrical fucking genius man I swear, don't wanna quote any lines cause than I'd have to quote the whole fucking song! Keep this shit up bro, downloading this motherfucker right now.

[Tash8]

2nd verse is awesome, hook was good, you mumbled a lot though, flow was sick, beat is gay loll good track

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thank you both....

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

myspace link is added
and bump

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz on checkin it out

[ritchieA]

this is well gd best song iv herd

[macdaddy019967]

Is that your normal voice it sounds weird, but I like how you pause the instrumental for a sec and speak...good song

[Lecrae]

wow fam... your lyrics and flow are CRAZY, the quality is decent and i enjoyed your editting! that track suprised me i'll admit, good job fam! keep it up!!!

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