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24-7 Ft. CiC

Postby TripleNineThree » Jul 27th, '09, 05:52

CiC is on the chorus, i'm on the verses, 2nd verse is open if you want to drop something

I'm on 1st verse and 3rd verse


Christian rap facelift hah

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Re: 24-7 Ft. CiC

Postby Slovinec » Jul 27th, '09, 06:17

sounds like the guy was crying and rapping at the same time, 6/10 in my oppinion
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Re: 24-7 Ft. CiC

Postby Xray » Jul 27th, '09, 06:46

Not a fan of your voice, you sound fat lol. And not a fan of religion rap lol. I just don't get this song, its like a weak ass attempt at making a banger except no one would listen to a christan rap song in a club. And the beat is :unsure: not made for a song about religion lol. And the chorus is nothing but pure wackness. Found it corny as fuck, yeah harsh feedback, but its my opinion.
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Re: 24-7 Ft. CiC

Postby ritchieA » Jul 28th, '09, 05:35

this is well gd gd flow and sick beat :y:
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Re: 24-7 Ft. CiC

Postby Lecrae » Jul 28th, '09, 21:24

Ay man whatsup?! I just wanna start off by saying me and you are in the same boat, no matter what they say keep rappin for god fam. Remember Jesus went through persecution so me n you will be going through persecution for being Christian rappers. But ALWAYS remember whats 100 years to eternity? Sure they may get the fame for 100 years, but we get more than fame for eternity for serving the one and only Lord Jesus Christ.

The song was decent, the editting on the chorus was pretty catchy, the verse could use some more editting and mixing but other than that I thought it was pretty decent. You'll get there fam, just keep prayin God will put you where he wants you to be :)
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Re: 24-7 Ft. CiC

Postby TripleNineThree » Jul 29th, '09, 05:21

I'm pretty sure you arn't the real Lecrae.
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Re: 24-7 Ft. CiC

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 30th, '09, 09:32

do you think jesus agrees with that low pitched voice lol...kiddin
xray summed it up more or less
beat isnt made for this...lyrics dont match the beat...
quality and delievery made this track good...heard some passion in your delievery...so thats a plus
but hook ehh....flow was aaaalllright nuttin amazing
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Re: 24-7 Ft. CiC

Postby TripleNineThree » Jul 30th, '09, 18:43

thanks for the feed fam!!
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Re: 24-7 Ft. CiC

Postby lost_angel05 » Jul 31st, '09, 00:35

I think this beat is cool for the subject matter. but however, the screwd vocals are badly mixed and too loud over the beat imo. TripleNineThree your parts sound str8. Quality is dope. Your flow is tight and likeable. definately feelin your delivery. all in all the screwed vocals mixing just didn't do it for me. but Its a good and well intended track. Much p'z. Returning the favor ^_^
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