Good bye. ::ALL FEED RETURNED::

[TripleNineThree]

Hey fam, the editting was decent, just keep practicing at that, some of the doubles didn't really fit in with the beat and the way you were flowing but hey thats just my opinion..

The lyrics were good! I expecially love your delivery and emotion I could tell you were meaning what you were saying you had heart behind it!! The quality seemed kinda off, but the only way you can really up that is by buying a new mic, but other than that keep it up fam I enjoyed it!!

Think you could return the feed man - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=64559

[JPearson]

agree with everyone else man... lyrics/flow/delivery was fuckin ace yer but the mixing didn't match up to it... but the mixing aint important... 9/10

[ritchieA]

this is gd man sweet lyrics and flow

[Xray]

so fuck "relationship", shit was more like a contract

Dope ass line.

Lyrics were dope, delivery was good also, but the flow wasn't 100%. Like it sounded like you were struggling to flow cause the beat was too slow for you. I thought the mixing was good, could use less reverb and some more EQ, but besides that it was good. Overlays on the hook was well placed, good track man, I felt the message, once again that line is superb lol.

[B.A.D.]

excelent track man, this is what I call Beautiful music..... one of my favourites from you

this mixing is better of the other mixings you use on the other tracks, so you should keep this one

loved the story, dope ass track man, amazing lyrics

[Tornado]

Great Track apart from the mixing (which i can't really comment on cos i dunno much about it). Lyrics and delievery were top, Flow was almost on it and beat is how i like em, cold and asimple so your message is centre stage..great

[B.A.D.]

Wow guys, thanks really. I'm listening again, and yeah the quality suckssssss lol. Oh well, I gotta get ahold of maybe to mix it... COUGHHHHHH

In my opinion, I think this quality is better...sounds clearer