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[Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

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[Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 2nd, '09, 18:53

[Le Tunisien Verse]
fuk it man,

i just wanna talk about,something i'd probably shout
what we face,all these days,i just wanna scream so loud!
it is stated,we are hated,our souls fukn faded...
race disgraced,hate our faces,this is why we behaved
we are slaved,in this world,fkn placed to be missplaced
nobody asked for life to give us birth in this place we'r Born
i would blast myself for fuks sake,just to get out from this storm
from what u say,what u spray;we are bombers we got no fate
is it late?if i really wanna make a step for u to take???
no matter what,ur still fake,oh yeah budd,its my mistake
with a small excuse,u chose to abuse,
but i refuse to accept the bruise!!!

......
[Scotty Verse]

.....but hey

don't act irrationally and blast yourself, we're not all the same
some of us are racists, face it, and none of them are ashamed
but for you to punish yourself over some stupid racist idiots,
it not the move to make, it is just not the right game to play
like most people who accuse, they are just doubting themselves
they feel all insecure, so they come out all compelled
to spread the hatred to arabs, kind of like how some homosexuals
are in denial so they beat on gay people, it's hypocritical
so homie, whenever you feel lonely just phone me
i'll be here to offer you comfort, confidence and a homely
welcome whenever you see me. just live your life to the full
don't listen to stupid ignorant people, we're the one's who are cool 
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Re: [Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby gutawafang » Aug 3rd, '09, 05:52

Good one. But it's daamn random. :p
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Re: [Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 3rd, '09, 12:16

not bad, liked the topic tho, tuna could've worked on the structure imo cause this:

race disgraced,hate our faces,this is why we behaved
we are slaved,in this world,fuuuuuuuuukin missplaced


is just plain wild,lol , using so many "U's" dont work man
it was ayte
Peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: [Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 3rd, '09, 15:15

Arabian Shady wrote:not bad, liked the topic tho, tuna could've worked on the structure imo cause this:

race disgraced,hate our faces,this is why we behaved
we are slaved,in this world,fuuuuuuuuukin missplaced


is just plain wild,lol , using so many "U's" dont work man
it was ayte
Peace

replaced it so quick x.x and thx
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Re: [Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby Solace » Aug 4th, '09, 03:37

Le Tuna: Could've worked on your multies and the flow. Your retarded spelling doesnt help either. It was below average.

Scott: Lately you've been dropping constant pieces that havent disappointed me and im glad for that. Keep it up.

And I don't quite get the title, Hate Us, No we dont?

Dont what?
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Re: [Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby gutawafang » Aug 4th, '09, 03:39

Solace wrote:Tuna, decent, Scotty, dope


And I don't quite get the title, Hate Us, No we dont?

Dont what?

The title reminds me of Bob the Builder. You know the song goes:
BOOOOOOOOB the builder, can we fix it?
BOOOOOOB the builder, yes we can!!!
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Re: [Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby Solace » Aug 4th, '09, 03:40

Lol shit, I havent seen that show on tv in a while

^And I reread the verses and gave slightly more indepth feed.
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Re: [Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 5th, '09, 23:36

Solace wrote:Le Tuna: Could've worked on your multies and the flow. Your retarded spelling doesnt help either. It was below average.

Scott: Lately you've been dropping constant pieces that havent disappointed me and im glad for that. Keep it up.

And I don't quite get the title, Hate Us, No we dont?

Dont what?

well u didnt understand the title means u didnt understand the concept of the song
Hate us:my verse ,my side, Arabs people getting hated by others,so i say Hate us!
No We dont:represents the verse of scot,he is the other side saying the west doesnt hate us :y:
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Re: [Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby Solace » Aug 5th, '09, 23:47

Oh I understand now. :y:
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Re: [Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby Emadyville » Aug 6th, '09, 02:29

Solace wrote:Le Tuna: Could've worked on your multies and the flow. Your retarded spelling doesnt help either. It was below average.

Scott: Lately you've been dropping constant pieces that havent disappointed me and im glad for that. Keep it up.

And I don't quite get the title, Hate Us, No we dont?

Dont what?


This, but I'll add that Scotts verse I thought was excellent. very interesting as well :y:
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Re: [Le Tunisien +Scotty] Hate us...No,we dont

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 6th, '09, 06:17

this is trash

who is scotty??
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