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Davinci's Page [40 bars]

Postby mcZu » Aug 7th, '09, 20:14

Prison break out style, bars are my accomplice
Lyrically greatness is what I accomplish
Your lost, Oahu stage is on the compass
Ya’ll acting like the US congress
Always promoting that eagle, faker than a con’s ass
Real things what I state like Kansas when I ink
With my pen, I write things that make ya think
What ya’ll say is as real as blob being thin
Rather listen to an unedited Sher thinking she can sing
Is it fair? Nope, I was born with cheat codes
Faster than a cheetah when my bars elope
Generals dope like a self made E slope when we rock
That dope venom pen game like E. Brock
If you see dots, you know your dead, period
You can’t fuck with me in my lyrical period, so..[pause]
I rock that serial killer flow; medical metrical show
Ending in a miracle metical selective row
Bars reach Saturn like Reed, yeah, literature bleeds
Each time Zu speaks...
Generals all time greatest –you just watch, son
In the guard we got Magic Spyder Johnson
So jump, son, when Solace Jordon grabs the mic
Forward players make you run fast out of our sight
Yeah, right. Blame Dr. J Anonymous Erving’s might
And James Bird; fly is what he describes
These anger driven names need to be controlled; so when there
Is a fight, I peace ‘em together
That’s why the Generals call me Zu Chamberlain the center
So back up your lines with some valid points
Or we’ll generally lock all of your joints
Name us and we’ll reach our boiling point
Rampage through MTV with a lyrical street anthem type of joint
Without the guns; ‘cause we all ready heavily armed
You’re already warned, we 5Star’s star in a porn flick play
‘cause we Generals come hard each time our pen game plays
Hip Hop’s revised blueprint and the architects in play
If we real? Nah, that you don’t need to say
‘cause ya’ll accent that question like the rapper Sway
So ya’ll know it’s the Z without the Jay, son.. so it’s a fact when
You battle me you’ll be in chaos like Jason Statham
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Davinci's Page [40 bars]

Postby mcZu » Aug 8th, '09, 10:51

Coleon wrote:Sound Off, Sound Off!

Lmfao at the way you analyze my lyrics :laughing:

But your right, the inspiration for the first couple of lines comes from Sound Off :smoking:
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Re: Davinci's Page [40 bars]

Postby mcZu » Aug 8th, '09, 17:06

^Thanks :b:

If you liked the General Storms, check out General Onslaught :y:
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Re: Davinci's Page [40 bars]

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 8th, '09, 17:18

mcZu wrote:Prison break out style, bars are my accomplice
Lyrically greatness is what I accomplish
Your lost, Oahu stage is on the compass
Ya’ll acting like the US congress
Always promoting that eagle, faker than a con’s ass
Real things what I state like Kansas when I ink
With my pen, I write things that make ya think
What ya’ll say is as real as blob being thin
Rather listen to an unedited Sher thinking she can sing
Is it fair? Nope, I was born with cheat codes
Faster than a cheetah when my bars elope
Generals dope like a self made E slope when we rock
That dope venom pen game like E. Brock
If you see dots, you know your dead, period
You can’t fuck with me in my lyrical period, so..[pause]
I rock that serial killer flow; medical metrical show
Ending in a miracle metical selective row
Bars reach Saturn like Reed, yeah, literature bleeds
Each time Zu speaks...
Generals all time greatest –you just watch, son
In the guard we got Magic Spyder Johnson
So jump, son, when Solace Jordon grabs the mic
Forward players make you run fast out of our sight
Yeah, right. Blame Dr. J Anonymous Erving’s might
And James Bird; fly is what he describes
These anger driven names need to be controlled; so when there
Is a fight, I peace ‘em together
That’s why the Generals call me Zu Chamberlain the center
So back up your lines with some valid points
Or we’ll generally lock all of your joints
Name us and we’ll reach our boiling point
Rampage through MTV with a lyrical street anthem type of joint
Without the guns; ‘cause we all ready heavily armed
You’re already warned, we 5Star’s star in a porn flick play
‘cause we Generals come hard each time our pen game plays
Hip Hop’s revised blueprint and the architects in play
If we real? Nah, that you don’t need to say
‘cause ya’ll accent that question like the rapper Sway
So ya’ll know it’s the Z without the Jay, son.. so it’s a fact when
You battle me you’ll be in chaos like Jason Statham

Your best flowing piece you've made :y:, not nearly as lyrical but it flows nice.
Good shit, 8/10
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Re: Davinci's Page [40 bars]

Postby mcZu » Aug 9th, '09, 17:18

^Thank you Anon :y:
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