Chet Starr - Fire Talk (Mixed By Ice Killa)

[BILI]

Wow its pretty dope I loved the beat and your voice is pretty cool..some dope rhymes and flow is good tho...not too complex but very enjoyable

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[mcZu]

Lyrics enjoyable, beat is dope, your flow is off an on.. though good enough throught out the song. What needs work is your delivery, it's like your not putting enough emotion in, can't hear the energy in your voice. If you work on that, then your songs will sound waaaaaaaaay better

[Kez]

Your delivery sounds bored or boring..not sure which yet
Your voice projects well enough though
Beat is nice
Lyrics are decent but they could be better, like they aint too complex and it's just typical stuff.
But considering what track it is that fits i suppose.
Flow is definately off and on and needs work, but there's some good parts
Quality sounds fine
Concept is alright but it's nothing special

Since you're up and coming it could be worse

Keep working

[gutawafang]

I enjoyed it man. It was "FIRE TALK"!!!

Flow and delivery was good, lyrics too. Good mixing too.

[TheWeirdoIsBack]

For what it was, it wasn't too bad. It sounded like a really random verse, so for that it wasn't bad lol.
I liked the beat choice, and the rhymes were pretty good. For the most part you got the flow right, a few off spots here and there. Wasn't a bad verse though. Keep it up

[Robbie G]

Cool track, your definitely getting better. I like how you seem to put extra emphases on the end of some of your lines, it sounds good.

I do agree with what Kez said, delivery is somewhat boring. Not sure how to change that but your voice is dope...so your fine.

[Tornado]

Flow was decent for the most part, lyrics were simple-ish but that can be worked on..Delievery was your main downfall, need more control of your voice, too squeaky lol. It's an ok practice track, keep at it

[Solace]

Ice Killa is dead, how'd he produce it for you?

Or is this a new Makaveli type of shit going on?

[Mr. Chambers]

delivery isn't really too bad..i think its mainly just the quality or something...........
lyrics were alright..nothing too special about them...flow was all over the place.......make it a nice steady pace b..........

but keep dropping.......

[Requiem]

lmao chet's got a whole basement full of ice killa unreleased ish

[B.A.D.]

Ice Killa is dead, how'd he produce it for you?

Or is this a new Makaveli type of shit going on?

lol

[Solace]

It was iight, i didnt enjoy the flow and ya energy's improving. lyrics were okay, but the flow was really bugging me. nice beat. Yeah and I didnt like the quality, or maybe it was just the mixing.

[dbeauluvswomen]

pretty good. Its got a grimey feel to it. honestly, as far as quality, flow, and lyrics go from all the songs I've heard from you I would take this one over all. you keep improving!

[gutawafang]

I'mma keep it 100... You need to stop reading. Memorize your lines and recite them 50+ times before you even record them. Make sure you say EVERY WORD how you want it to be said. Make sure you write TO THE BEAT, don't just write and pick out a beat.. Because you cramped words in and sped up your 'flow' to make the rhyming word hit the snare. Rhymes don't always have to hit the snares, just an fyi.

Your voice is ok, for being so young... But you should rhyme about things you KNOW not shit you hear in songs. Shit, rap about school or something you can relate to. I say that because that's how you get the most emotion out of lyrics.

Sounds proffessional.

I totally agree about reciting the lyrics 50+ times before recording it.