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ThomasAguanis
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DragonzEdge
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Total votes : 6

ThomasAguanis vs. DragonzEdge

Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 8th, '05, 21:14

the battle is done. Results:
ThomasAguanis 60%
DragonzEdge 40%


thanks for a grest battle. it made us both better.
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Postby 4D » Jul 8th, '05, 21:46

O.k thomas u just gonna give up. Oh well, least u tried. Good luck anyway!
P.s I`m a beginner aswel. I only started doin this a few months ago.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 8th, '05, 23:45

i'll keep trying i changed my mind but i'll still keep this topic for anyone to battle me. and if you just started battle rapping a few months ago your going to be really good in a year or more. maybe a big name rapper
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Postby 4D » Jul 9th, '05, 00:01

Nah, i`m too old for that shit.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 9th, '05, 04:10

i'll take advice from a 27 year old and start to freestyle.
if you wanna battle me WARNING you'll end up senile
so try and take shots at me for now. i'll be back in a week.
while your trying to respond i'll be in north carolina lying on a beach.
so anyone who wants to battle step up.
i'll be better when i get back so be prepared to be messed up.
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Postby Guest » Jul 17th, '05, 03:26

i changed the topic so i can battle anyone
i dont care if your thirteen or seventy-one
i'm gonna do my best to destroy you lyrically
you cant be that big so someone challenge me
or better yet i challenge everyone
i was scared at first but now i wont run
or make up whack rhymes like i did at first
so come on people someone drop a verse.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 17th, '05, 03:32

Anonymous wrote:i changed the topic so i can battle anyone
i dont care if your thirteen or seventy-one
i'm gonna do my best to destroy you lyrically
you cant be that big so someone challenge me
or better yet i challenge everyone
i was scared at first but now i wont run
or make up whack rhymes like i did at first
so come on people someone drop a verse.


oops. i thought i was signed in. my bad
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Postby DragonzEdge » Jul 19th, '05, 10:34

I'll take a go at you, my friend calls me the Lyrikal Assassin.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 20th, '05, 01:29

finally. someone to battle :D
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Postby DragonzEdge » Jul 20th, '05, 02:06

why dont you take a shot at me first
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 20th, '05, 03:48

i'll take a shot at you even thought i have 2 verses ready to go.
you read the topic. it's not my fault your slow.
My rhymes are getting better now along with my flow.
pretty soon you'll be calling me pimp and you'll be called ho.
and no i'm not gay because i know that's what you would say.
Now pretend your a dj and i'm kay slay
get ready to be slapped and be ready to rap.
Mr. DragonzEdge you ain't nothing yet to me but a piece of crap.
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Postby DragonzEdge » Jul 20th, '05, 04:55

crap...thought i signed in

Anonymous wrote:you think your rhyme is so rad
but your punkass is just a fad
your ameteur rhymes cant harm me, im Iron clad
i aint gonna be called a ho cuz i keep my pimp hand strong
imma turn everything you say upside down and prove you wrong
now make like a condom and hold my load
i aint turnin around im goin straight through the fork in the road
you aint provin to me that you can spit
all you doin is lookin like piece of shit


thats mine btw
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not a beginner

Postby shadyslady121 » Jul 20th, '05, 04:59

I actually been rapping for like 2 years and I am a girl but people say I can beat alot of boys out there in the rap game..so ima try and spit here online for you's

Lyrically bound with a gun in one hand I pound
Any one who starts shit will get knocked the fuck to the ground
I know how to get down, they call me Vodatious they call you Charlie brown
I grew up with thugs and pimps trying to get threw life with people acting like they was the shit
Being with the guy of my dreams turned out to be a night mare he always cheated on me
Like we was in a movie scene ,he always put on that theme
He acted so shady he was always so lazy, he would say he loved me then he would beat me like crazy
scary ass times fits into my bad ass rhymes
I am just about ready to end this life go up to god and my grandma and make everything right
But before I go:
I am sorry too everyone whome I let down,Sorry to my family who I didn't make proud
And I am sorry to my friends for not being true most of all I am sorry to my love for not being his best boo
{Gun Shots}


Thats from one of my songs with my friends..tell me what you think..
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Postby DragonzEdge » Jul 20th, '05, 05:03

lady we are battlin here
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Postby Guest » Jul 20th, '05, 22:22

you may be iron clad but i'll harm you anyway.
i'm like pure acid i'll burn through you anyday.
and try to turn me upside down. you'll just repeat whatever i say.
come up with your own rhymes. Don't be gay.
and i'm not saying you stole my shit
i'm just trying to prove i can spit.
so comeback with some better rhymes
because i wanna do the same so we'll both shine.
and i mean we should give all we can.
so in the end we both come out better men.
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