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[Tranquil]

JeeJuh.com, LMFAO, this dude cant fucking rap for shit, lol, he didnt even mix it properly, he sounds bored as fuck on the track, its a waste of time even listening to it, dont listen to it

[B.A.D.]

hahaha, good, its good to play with this type of concepts even if you ain't on it, makes it fun

you need to improve the mixing of your quality big time cuz Its hard to understand, also you sound bored on the track, need to find a motivating delivery, plus a little more wordplay into that

little by little, you'll go better man,

keep it up

if you wanna check out some of my new shit:
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[Restlesswon]

good flow bro, like axd said, work on that delivery, stay up

[Boston]

i mean i dont thnik its that bad considering you made the song with no experience basically. good to try to be versatile so ill give you that. the quality isnt good at all to me, and the flow is jus choppy/boring to me. beat wasnt bad. ax was right about the delivery, u need to step that up. get into it man

keep it up tho, if u can peep my new track High Times please
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