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NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

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NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 20th, '09, 02:35

New track, #2 off "The Life Overdose"! Here's another little preview for ya'll.
Let me know what you think!

http://www.myspace.com/stevespag
Steve Spag - One More Time_EndoftheLine_.mp3 - 2.11MB
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3yl8Twwsx08
http://www.soundclick.com/stevespag

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Solace » Aug 20th, '09, 02:39

The beginning of it reminds me of Scarsdale by Kyle Spratt because of that sound in the beat...I can't really explain sorry lol. Your flow kind of bored me, like I usually expect more from you but this was sorta "eh". The hook I didnt favour either. I can easily chill back and listen to this shit, but comparing to the other tracks from this album it ain't faring well. Lyrics were still good though and it sorta saved it for me. This was an average track in my opinion from you, but shit I can't expect everything from you to be 9/10 or 10/10 you know?

Anyways, 7.5/10

PS. 1:30 when you say "rhyming" it reminded me of the accent on Ass Like That lol...
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby *MIRANDA* » Aug 20th, '09, 03:07

:o loved it
liked the laid back chorus to
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 20th, '09, 03:25

good lyrics, catchy beat but there wasn't enough material to feel the impact of this track

non the less, it was a good song but prolly just considered as a good filler track since i thought it felt like u were too laid back and that made it seem like u weren't puttin in the effort needed to raise eyebrows

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Jay-19 » Aug 20th, '09, 08:55

You kinda reminded me of Sajjad in the beginning.
You always got a good flow going and the lyrics are nice, not too complex, not too simple, good balance.
Beat is real catchy and the melody sticks in my head.
Mixing sounds really good, as always with you.

So overall, really good track. :y: :b:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 20th, '09, 10:54

wont repeat myself...good track :y: :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 20th, '09, 22:06

Thanks for all the feed guys, glad you're diggin the music!
I'm working on getting the rest up soon, so sit tight!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Xray » Aug 20th, '09, 22:15

I like the beat a lot, it sounds like a mixture of a Lloyd Banks beat and Eminem beat. Really enjoyable track to listen to, the flow on the hook is dope, I really like the hook haha. The flow on the verses were different to what I expected, but it grew on me in an instant. Delivery was definitely on point, and the mixing was on some studio shit homie. Good shit.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 22nd, '09, 04:03

^^
Thanks much dude!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Boston » Aug 23rd, '09, 04:40

first thing i notice is the jumpy beat and the way you matched your flow to the beat is unique and ill to me. at first i was thinking the subject you were talking about wasnt fittin to the beat but it later grew on me later in the first verse. the hook is catchy to me, and like the sing type style. in verse 2 i like the way you speed it up from the middle-ish to the end. i enjoyed this song but for some reason the quality bothers me for some reason, (not bad quality but idk how to put it ha) but good track man
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 24th, '09, 19:43

hmm I've heard this beat before, hmm I think someone used it, (was it spizzy??) but I don't remember exactly who, sinima right??

got a great flow man, and your mixing is TOP quality :worship: :worship: :worship:

great track hahaha, very enjoyable, the hook is good but hmm you could've added more to it

damnz, the flow its what its really impressive man

good track man :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Tornado » Aug 26th, '09, 15:44

You attacked this differently to how i thought, beat s kinda Eminem-ish/Banks like X said, smooth flow and delivery and catchy chours. Good track
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 27th, '09, 02:20

Thanks for the feed guys, and yes Ax, that was a Sinima production. What can I say? They know JUST what I like, lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '09, 02:22

Duuuuuuuuuuuude Life overdose has been out for like 2 weeks why aint you release it on the net yet :angry: :(
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - "One More Time (EndoftheLine)"

Postby classthe_king » Aug 27th, '09, 03:02

the beat was good, I loved the first verse, the flow was on fire and the lyrics were great too. The chorus was, alright kinda catchy. Didn't like the second verse nearly as much because you simplified the flow a ton. All in all good track and i can't wait to hear the rest of the album.
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