***BACK TO BASICS***NEW

[King Bullet]

Sup TR friends,I have a new track up on myspace called Back To Basics.This is to all of my haters and all of those doubtful motherfuckers.Check it out friends: www.myspace.com/rapdogg13
Feedback plz.

[King Bullet]

Thank y'all for your opinion...

[classthe_king]

The mixing is terrible, i can't understand half of what your saying. The intro was really annoying and the lyrics were below average. I couldn't follow the rhyme scheme at all.

[King Bullet]

The mixing is terrible, i can't understand half of what your saying. The intro was really annoying and the lyrics were below average. I couldn't follow the rhyme scheme at all.

Man,you sure that rap is right music for you???It's perfectly understandable,only at little parts you can't understand maybe something.
You might understand this bitch:

I'm just chasin dream,this is not a tactic,listen to makin' a fuckin' classic.
Savin' hip hop,situation-call it drastic.Spittin' rhymes,overload of flow,call it massive.
Call me the father coz son you need to practice,
coz I'm way in front of you,you'll never catch this!
I showed you the fuckin' game,on 7 years I put an accent.
Everybody talkin' shit,this song is a dick to make your ass wrecked.
You can't shit in the mic,motherfucker pass that!
This is why you call me master,rap like this is surely best rap!
Step in front of me and you know you'll get blasted...

[classthe_king]

The mixing is terrible, i can't understand half of what your saying. The intro was really annoying and the lyrics were below average. I couldn't follow the rhyme scheme at all.

Man,you sure that rap is right music for you???It's perfectly understandable,only at little parts you can't understand maybe something.
You might understand this bitch:

I'm just chasin dream,this is not a tactic,listen to makin' a fuckin' classic.
Savin' hip hop,situation-call it drastic.Spittin' rhymes,overload of flow,call it massive.
Call me the father coz son you need to practice,
coz I'm way in front of you,you'll never catch this!
I showed you the fuckin' game,on 7 years I put an accent.
Everybody talkin' shit,this song is a dick to make your ass wrecked.
You can't shit in the mic,motherfucker pass that!
This is why you call me master,rap like this is surely best rap!
Step in front of me and you know you'll get blasted...

lmao@ that whole post

[King Bullet]

you see...all you hatin' motherfuckers know is talk shit...that's the only thing you know perfect.cock sucker.

[classthe_king]

you see...all you hatin' motherfuckers know is talk shit...that's the only thing you know perfect.cock sucker.

Why don't you learn how to write in english, then respond

[King Bullet]

and what did i write wrong you idiot?

[Mr. Chambers]

i hope your joking bout the 6 years shit.....cuz if so.....you really behind dog......

ok lets start

your quality is horrible...but ok...some ppl can't afford the equipment cool

your flow is shakey.....throughout
your deliver tho very weak......is too much like eminems..........then after looking @ a couple pics realized you try to be just like him....not surprising
lyrics were meh...nothing special...

honestly bro...if this is all you got after 6 years.....i think its time to start considering a new hobby.......you should be mastering your own style @ this point...instead you just tryna be the next eminem...... ...just be yourself.............cuz you won't ever get respect or play if your tryna be a mr. me too...........drop the act and just do you.....

[King Bullet]

i hope your joking bout the 6 years shit.....cuz if so.....you really behind dog......

ok lets start

your quality is horrible...but ok...some ppl can't afford the equipment cool

your flow is shakey.....throughout
your deliver tho very weak......is too much like eminems..........then after looking @ a couple pics realized you try to be just like him....not surprising
lyrics were meh...nothing special...

honestly bro...if this is all you got after 6 years.....i think its time to start considering a new hobby.......you should be mastering your own style @ this point...instead you just tryna be the next eminem...... ...just be yourself.............cuz you won't ever get respect or play if your tryna be a mr. me too...........drop the act and just do you.....

Quality was not brilliant coz it was a quickly recorded song,so my bad.I do kinda have my own thing,listen to other songs on myspace.It's my own story,and talkin' bout the flow,it's the only way I know how to drop my shit.I mean,I can rip it in lotta ways,but this one is my fav.Oh and bout the Eminem comparison,just listen to Asher Roth's As I Em and you'll figure my answer.Peace out.

[Mr. Chambers]

^if your not going to take the feedback into consideration and shoot it down...theres no point in dropping on a forum.........

[King Bullet]

No,it's cool,I take the critic,you just being real in a way.As an artist of course I have to defend myself.You have to understand me man,I grew up on his music and also became a rapper so there are some similarities.Look,I'm bout to post a snippet on myspace bout this whole thing of missunderstanding and shit.Here's the verse:

I'm white and I rap so it's good that I got this far,
sensitive ears will in a second spot this bar,
defending my image,plus the trouble,shit it caught me hard.
I'm cold outside,but the blood is hot at heart.
Not too complexive,cause I want everyone to to understand and feel my message.
Cause it's not easy to stand when they heat this pressure.
Confidently I state that I'm better than half of rappers out there,
they jealous,so soon as I spit my shit they say they doubt that.
What do I gotta do to make you feel this pain?
I'm not a gangsta,not a thug,I'm not dealin' 'caine.
I'm just a kid from the 'burbs,willin' respect and willin' fame.
Another Eminem they say,man they kill my brain,
cause we not the same,only playin' cards in the same game.
I'm slightly goin' insane,how big picture do I gotta paint just to fit this frame?
It's really crazy the way they see me,askin' me why do I spit this way.
I'm bout to pitch this blade,so you better watch how you git this tape,
I'm sick of that shit,so I adress it and flip this page,
not mad anymore cause I'm ending that shift of rage...

[B.A.D.]

can't understand a fucking word

learn to mix dog

[Mr. Chambers]

No,it's cool,I take the critic,you just being real in a way.As an artist of course I have to defend myself.You have to understand me man,I grew up on his music and also became a rapper so there are some similarities.Look,I'm bout to post a snippet on myspace bout this whole thing of missunderstanding and shit.Here's the verse:

I'm white and I rap so it's good that I got this far,
sensitive ears will in a second spot this bar,
defending my image,plus the trouble,shit it caught me hard.
I'm cold outside,but the blood is hot at heart.
Not too complexive,cause I want everyone to to understand and feel my message.
Cause it's not easy to stand when they heat this pressure.
Confidently I state that I'm better than half of rappers out there,
they jealous,so soon as I spit my shit they say they doubt that.
What do I gotta do to make you feel this pain?
I'm not a gangsta,not a thug,I'm not dealin' 'caine.
I'm just a kid from the 'burbs,willin' respect and willin' fame.
Another Eminem they say,man they kill my brain,
cause we not the same,only playin' cards in the same game.
I'm slightly goin' insane,how big picture do I gotta paint just to fit this frame?
It's really crazy the way they see me,askin' me why do I spit this way.
I'm bout to pitch this blade,so you better watch how you git this tape,
I'm sick of that shit,so I adress it and flip this page,
not mad anymore cause I'm ending that shift of rage...

no i don't understand....i honestly didn't listen to anyone but eminem for about 3 years(2000-2003)....he got me into hip hop...and i'm still a fan of his.....and i have yet tried to sound like him in any aspects....and its not just you...its alot of white rappers.......like......we already have enough trouble getting recognition for being ourselfs without the instant "eminem" comparisons....and rappers like yourself and many others make it even harder by pretty much biting his style and perfecting it down to his accent.....i'm not really saying your ass or wack.........you just need to find your own style......yes you can be influenced by eminem...but to sound like him =\......just try to be yourself........it really isn't that hard..and in the end you'll feel so much better about your music........i'll wish you the best tho...........

[King Bullet]

thnx dawg,that was some deep shit man.lol nah,it's cool,i'm still in that process of experimenting with flows and styles.soon enough i'll come up with somethin' better.lotta love,peace out