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New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 27th, '09, 20:18

http://www.zshare.net/audio/64745767ad487462/

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Split light in half to grip mics and Flash
when it goes to your ears it will leave a rash
when I spit some more your are bleeding ash
when I come real close you are seeping fast
Don't know how long will this evening last
no matter how long it will beat your ass
rob you for your wallet, keep the cash
put it to your head, the heat will lash
I blast and cock till your sleeping past
the time on the clock, and it's beepin wrath
bash you in the face you weakling trash
don't you dare even say I'm speaking rash
get sliced on your hand like your tweaking glass
put metal on my fist and your eating brass
searchin for this bitch like I'm seeking ass
to find and destroy with a beaming bash

get up, what happened, bask in night
the task is right do you ask to fight
doctors rushes and Flash the light
make them leave the scene cause the cash is right
pick you up by your skin and throw you off
the bridge with your bitch for showing off
As you fall you'll know what I do is right
revelations hit as your losing might
I'm down on my knees, cause I know it's wrong
but I throw it off, and I go and cough
blood leaks from my mouth as I'm turning shape
slice my skin with my nails, those burning scrapes
I don't know what to do, I got the sins
should I heat my head and watch it spin?
put the chrome to my dome and close my eyes
I shot and I died yet I'm still alive

Promo for what's to come. :flower:
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 27th, '09, 20:21

as i said
good mixing indeed...
pronouncation is slurred somtimes...but you figure that out too..
hook is kool...laugh is psycho ...
good track...
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 27th, '09, 20:25

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:as i said
good mixing indeed...
pronouncation is slurred somtimes...but you figure that out too..
hook is kool...laugh is psycho ...
good track...

:worship: :worship: Thanks bro
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 27th, '09, 21:49

Pretty decent track, man. Like Chris said, you're slurring at some times, but for the most part you seem to control your flow. Wasn't feelin' the hook though.

Keep it up dude, you have some promise!
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 27th, '09, 22:02

Steve Spag wrote:Pretty decent track, man. Like Chris said, you're slurring at some times, but for the most part you seem to control your flow. Wasn't feelin' the hook though.

Keep it up dude, you have some promise!
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby BILI » Aug 27th, '09, 22:05

This is absolutely dope :worship: :worship: :worship: :y:
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 27th, '09, 22:13

BILI wrote:This is absolutely dope :worship: :worship: :worship: :y:

Hell fucking yeah! That's what I like to hear! :worship: :worship:
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 28th, '09, 00:05

BILI wrote:This is absolutely dope :worship: :worship: :worship: :y:


this is crazy man

I fucking loved it, your mixing and mastering sounds very good, almost pro :y: :y:

u crazy, this is hot :worship: :worship:

the flow is the best part, damn, u a genious in this
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 28th, '09, 00:11

Big Ax-D wrote:
BILI wrote:This is absolutely dope :worship: :worship: :worship: :y:


this is crazy man

I fucking loved it, your mixing and mastering sounds very good, almost pro :y: :y:

u crazy, this is hot :worship: :worship:

the flow is the best part, damn, u a genious in this

:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: HELL YEAH!!!
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 28th, '09, 00:12

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:first verse was my favourite, i didn't like how you said 'wallet' for some reason. but other than that, was extremely dope. :worship:

Thanks a lot Scotty BOYYYYYYYY :worship: :worship:
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 28th, '09, 00:15

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
$(@TTY B@Y wrote:first verse was my favourite, i didn't like how you said 'wallet' for some reason. but other than that, was extremely dope. :worship:

Thanks a lot Scotty BOYYYYYYYY :worship: :worship:


listened to it again, i take back the wallet comment. :flower:

Lmfao, good. :tounge2:
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby classthe_king » Aug 28th, '09, 00:43

wow, dope as fuck. Your flow was on fire and your delivery was the best its ever been for you imo. Beat was on fire and your lyrics were dope too. I really felt the song, can't wait for the mixtape.
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby Jay-19 » Aug 28th, '09, 12:37

Bro... the energy you kept om this joint is fucking amazing man! :worship:
I love it. You got that whole psycho thing going on with this one, and I'm really enjoying that kind of style in rap songs.
Lyrics were good, could be better, could be worse. You know, since you usually rap words I've never heard about this is a step down for you lyrics wise, but fuck that! :y:
Mixing is really really improved from what I heard the last time I listened to you. So good work! :y:

Overall, dope track!


PS. We gotta get on a track together soon man!
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 28th, '09, 13:05

Jay-19 wrote:Bro... the energy you kept om this joint is fucking amazing man! :worship:
I love it. You got that whole psycho thing going on with this one, and I'm really enjoying that kind of style in rap songs.
Lyrics were good, could be better, could be worse. You know, since you usually rap words I've never heard about this is a step down for you lyrics wise, but fuck that! :y:
Mixing is really really improved from what I heard the last time I listened to you. So good work! :y:

Overall, dope track!


PS. We gotta get on a track together soon man!

:worship: :worship: Thank you bro, and yes we must get on a track soon, add me on MSN gothik_knives@hotmail.com so we can talk about collabs
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Re: New Song From My Mixtape, Don't Cross Me

Postby gutawafang » Aug 28th, '09, 16:22

LOL. After reading the lyrics, the flow was perfect. :sweating:

Anyways, as I said before, I look forward to that mixtape. :flower:
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