NOEEZY - Pacin' [First Draft]

[Noeezy]

Second draft of a song I wrote a while ago, just working on making my vocals better so I can work on a new version soon. The other songs are just some beats I made. Will return feed

http://www.myspace.com/noeezyc4

EDIT: For lyrics, click on "View Blog"

EDIT: Will be working on a new version with longer verses soon

[mcZu]

The song aint on your myspace anymore.

[Noeezy]

The song aint on your myspace anymore.

They blocked my account for some reason but I just got it unlocked so it should show up now

[Xray]

Your flow does need work but it has that potential to advance so keep doing what your doing, flow wise and you'll only improve. As for the delivery, you sound bored, gotta bring out some of that energy and use it. Lyric wise, its not bad. Lyrics look 10 times nicer if there recorded right.

[Noeezy]

Your flow does need work but it has that potential to advance so keep doing what your doing, flow wise and you'll only improve. As for the delivery, you sound bored, gotta bring out some of that energy and use it. Lyric wise, its not bad. Lyrics look 10 times nicer if there recorded right.

yeah I'm trying to figure out the best way to develop my delivery without messing up my flow.
cause whenever I try to change delivery or somethin i have to edit the lyrics and takeout some multis, metaphors, etc. Maybe that's just somethin I have to give up for better delivery.

Thanks for feed bro, post a link if you guys want return feed